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Updated on January 21, 2012

Number Two Hundred rap.

It's my own writing

so you must

hear it from me only

If I play foolish

start out fighting

wanting to be

the coolest person

On this HP

I will then

be proving

That I am

Actually foolish

doing myself

a whole bunch

of injustice

and only to me

It should be

me , myself and I

we usually agree

I cannot Just get up

easily and fearlessly

stand up and

put my best stuff

up on here

directly on air

Playing bad boy

Someone who

Simply don’t care

About the pilferer

Who silently waits

The slick robber

moving truck

to the front

of your gates

that top shelf hub

that what he needs

to make the next score

that's how he feeds

fraudulent urges

from door to door

Will grab his share

Of your ignorance

But I won't dare

I will rather

Use my ability

And my intelligence

Instead of giving

it up so easy

to a thief, freelance

now I am getting angry

shame, flaming red.

I sleep well enough

Each night

When I hit my bed

Am not worrying

About those

precious words

That that flowed

from my head

Now so easily said

Then it got stolen,


Considered dead

I will stay at

The mercy of those

Who see it fit,

To show

Professional pity

I would let mistakes

and typos expose me

To those pros

Who by one sniff

of their trained noses

That’s what keeps

Them staying

Ahead and on top

Knowing that the day

When they would

Ever ask me to freeze

or stop, and to the

Floor I must go

That’s when I know

Their balloon

Got popped

For me I am

Already the best

from that school yard

many years ago

I aced the test

many wanted to know

If I am exorcised

No longer possessed

I will write simplicity

When I go to sleep

At night

I do get my rest.

Not move from

side to side

a nervous mess

I give thanks and praises

I worship the best

I am blessed

I don’t write for you

I write for me

Especially on here

Its psychology

knowing your history

psychology says

My greatest work

Can’t be for free!

Take this one also

I painted it Red

I had great fun

Getting from my

very first about

Three months ago

Now am able

To show others how

They can get to!

Number two hundred!


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      That I plan to do I sized it up , last night I look at the pics and I looked at two comments , you know that you lay them out , I have to go into your mind to get what you mean , what you say, is to everyone , what you mean , I reserve the right to remain as silent as you sometimes.


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      WD Curry 111 6 years ago from Space Coast

      If you feel like a real read then read about the man on the bus.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      I love Eminem's voice there is a truth in his voice . When I walk the wild side , anything went. Now there is no excuse for me , I made my choice.


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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Sky, There's some rap that i like, others i do not. I like Lil Wayne and Eminem. Some of their lyrics turn me off. When i walk on the treadmill i like to listen to the beat of RAP. I just bought a CD of Chuck Berry, 'The millennium collection' some of the songs are a bit like RAP. I am a music lover..I can't imagine living without music...Cheers

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Let us all give thanks and praises "AE" I really don't know and don't want to , I wish them well . Do you ever listen to rap , if so which ones?

      I know you love Tina . Shows your diversity and ability to be a conscious human and again I remember your great stories.

      Walk good and give thanks.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thank you brethren Frank . It's only obvious that what I am seeing up ahead is quite interesting, I am so interesting in seeing, , because it's in my only plan and the roads run through here , otherwise the spirit that give the energy and direction, said it was ok to be here . I give thanks to all those unselfish human souls soul who clearly know as that God can't like ugly , and hating for no reason make their evilness shine through and evil is ugly!

      I have not one jealous bone in my body , and I relish beauty in every aspect , those that are follow are all inspirations to me in one way or another. I believe that the Most High God exist 100%. But I also believe as there is Good , there Must be Evil. Had I not seen the power of both , maybe I would have doubts.

      So I don't believe in excuses , my mom told me that I must always count to ten before doing that which I not sure, so I won't have to make excuses and tell lies, later, and it works. I am not sorry for anything , I think of what I do before I do.

      So 400 is not out of the picture in this same amount of time , especially if I feel like using the over 1000 that I already have stashed.

      But I will let the spirit guide , because I know I have learned quite a lot fro the haters, I have experienced, I must find ways to offer help , and show them that great people are incapable of evil actions, and I must do this through my work, which will be also equally as good fro the entire evil population.

      Howe can anyone not like another or their work, just because?

      One can so easily take another road stay in Gods Light, so that's a red flag, and we must pray and give thanks and praises to the Most High God, to keep our heart and mind centered on his will. Look what I will write for my 100 follower, only because this minute another innocent human being will die , cease to exist through ignorance, the very same ignorance, practiced by those who are professing to be wise. Because I know that the wages of sin is death. If you pray to your belief your next gesture won't be evil.

      Thanks brethren and Bless.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      When you read this while listening to Tina, you could say that it's a rap..To me it's more like a rant and a great one!! Did someone steal some of your work? I found some of my poetry on another site...I didn' care..I don't write for money and it 'kinda made me feel good, someone liking it enough to steal it HaHa..Thank you Sky..I LOVE Tina, " Sre's simply the best " Cheers my friend..

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      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      First of all congrats on the 200 Hub.. yeah we knew it was in you and you came with it hitting the street running... have 200 more.. yea?

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks Gypsy Rose Lee . lol I told the Hubber snskesslane, that I will read the hub of anyone who answers ,and here I am still answering 2:22am. I said it will be fun. But in my life for my self , I have adopted things that correct for me , after which I compare it with my surroundings , because I am in a world of people, once it feels in line with me, I need no ones approval. I say this to say , whether or not you knew I made that promise to my self , I must do it, because they say a promise is a comfort to a fool , and I am not one , so it must be for those I come to know.

      I felt this urge to do something different for Hub number 200 and, I know people steal other peoples work here, because I am part of this world. Now I give one with a difference.

      Now I come over to read one of your beautiful God fearing hubs.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Great rap and voted up and awesome. I could feel the beat and love that song by Tina.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      I knew what you meant then and even more so now, I speak French and Spanish, and had no idea when I was growing up at one time it sounded cryptic. But remembering one of my heroes Hon Robert Nestor Marley ,he said and I repeat for just about the umpteen time I am not even close to being lazy. He said and you already know it, but we have learned to share quite a long time ago, here goes: The Biggest MAN you will ever see was himself once a baby. That includes you and me.

      If we accept that job, to go help mankind in any part of this worlds we must go with open hearts , regardless of language or cul;ture , so we can't be total strangers to anything different, and finally what if it's us that needs help.

      I will accept my life saving medication even if the label and directions comes in Zoaniese.

      I see beyond any doors or blockades either through it or around it, never back , that a sign of failure of finish, I have met death before and went around it. Great experience.

      Give Thanks.

      The promise I made for today have me reading something of yours sometime tonight .

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks for reading and commenting dadibobs. Looks like it's sort of interesting to you. Just needed something to top off the quick 200 score, like in the game of cricket.

      Glad you like and I will be over your way soon to keep my word.


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      WD Curry 111 6 years ago from Space Coast

      What did I say when we first met? That's right Sky9106! I said "I see you are not lazy." We had fun, because you know few who are fluent in cryptic. I would leave these here to ferment to fine wine . . . or maybe go to 4 or 500 by summer . . . let them do the work. Then, you will go on to to the new personna you have earned . . . 3rdHeaven9106.

      They want to talk about Pentecost, and say they are like the the Apostles in the Book of Acts. I say, "What about the toungues of fire? I don't see anyone with tongues of fire burning from their head.

      Sky9106 . . . what is that I see? Lift your hat . . . I think I see smoke!

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      dadibobs 6 years ago from Manchester, England

      This is the first rap i've come accross in here lol, i'm very impressed!

      Great work :)

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      That you so much snakeslane and now in the spirit of some form of visible gratitude I will celebrate by reading a hub from everyone who comments . That sounds fun ain't it?

      So now I also thank you for giving me this great and you are first, so see you soon.

      Life is always what you make it.


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      Verlie Burroughs 6 years ago from Canada

      Congratulations on hitting the 200 poems Sky9106! This rap rocks! Regards, snakeslane