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A Blind Race

Updated on December 27, 2014
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My own Making

Who am I ? riddled bad and clueless,

A set of desires or a clone all perfect ?

A pond left idle or a river gone reckless ?

I flow blind and stop abrupt to stagnate.


How I run after the alluring world !

And conform ways to stay in race.

I flock to the wind with my mad mind,

Stormed by ocean of vagrant waves.


Fascinated by wings I flock to places,

Which bough to sit, which way to fly ?

I tread on paths, dragged by my eyes,

Drawn to the whirlpool, I lost my way.


Can I find own way and redeem me ?

Heart was mine but beating betrayed.

Mind was mine but thinking choked me,

I was blindly drawn to the mad world.


Caged in a hypnotic fatal sight,

Entangled in a web woven by me.

Eyes have forgotten my own track.

I love yet passions are not mine.


I talk but words are not my words,

I dream but dreams aren't mine.

Success attained not my success,

and I breath but living is not mine.


Stung by the snares and smiles,

I don't recognize my own face !

Mad of voices, strangled by tones,

I obscured myself by a wily ruse !



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      Eric Dierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      That beauty of not being. Excellent.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Wonderful poem Harishprasad. It is easy to get lost in the world and all it offers. We can become like clones and be lead by the masses trying to compete and just getting lost in the crowd. It's easy to lose our identity and our uniqueness, but we have to fight to find it and be ourselves. Be different and proud of it. It is the unique people who stand out and make a difference to the world. Voted up.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Glad you liked it. Eric, I often think how poorly we think of ourselves comparing with all the glittering wealth and sagas of successful people all around. Instead of delving deep into the recesses of our own mind and heart and assessing our own traits & capabilities, we plunge into the mad rat race blindly. Thank you for appreciating and commenting on this poem. All peace. :-)

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      How truly you have commented on this hub, John. Jealousy, envy, malice, agitation of mind, self-pity, inferiority complex etc. are such traits that remaining slaves to them kills our fantastic urge to live happily and flourish vigorously. When we're our own self, we are in a better position to excel ourselves and also appreciate others. Such questions relating to our life and this human existence often arise in my mind and I try to find answers. This tiny poem is the result of that quest. Thank you for appreciating it and commenting so insightfully. All peace and happiness. :-)

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      I like who i am and would not change anything about me those who feel the opposite I feel for them. Your powerful words struck a cord it is so true and valuable to know be yourself is the most important in life.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      I like such a fantastic and positive feedback from a deep and an awesome thinker like you. I agree there is great beauty in accepting oneself with all grace and abundance. To excel within the inherent strengths and capabilities of one's own and remain positive throughout life is really to live rich and full. Devika, I'm all for your brilliant attitude and outlook of life. Thank you for appreciating the poem and commenting so beautifully. All peace. :-)

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      Chitrangada Sharan 3 years ago from New Delhi, India

      You are so good at expressing yourself in few words! The message is clear, Be yourself and be content and happy about it.

      Very well done!

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      ChitrangdaSharan, it is a pity that most of us flock to the successful and remarkable persons so madly and want to copy them. However, if we go deep into their life-struggles ,we find that whatever fame and excellence they achieved, it was all colored with their own peculiar traits and not because they copied somebody else wholly. So kind of you to have visited this hub and commented so nicely. Thanks. All peace. :-)

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      K.A.E Grove 3 years ago from Australia

      ah this world so filled with carbon cut outs that it is hard to know the sound of your own voice,

      a though provoking write, so very well done :)

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Your comments are so appropriate, nighthag. We are so desperate to run after so many things at the expense of ignoring our own capabilities, strength, charm and grace. To forget ourselves so blatantly is a real tregedy ! Thanks for appreciating and your kind comments.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 3 years ago from Lagos

      sad reflections! but, it made so much meaning to me.

      I have learnt to be myself no matter what. I don't follow the crowd that's why I made rules for myself. LOL.

      Rediscover yourself and make a new way; forget the people in the world and what they say. live your own life...

      good one!

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      In order to live happily, we must learn to love ourselves first. Unless our heart is not filled with affection, how can we measure the love glowing in the eyes of others ? How many times since our childhood have we heard words like " be like him/her , so & so ". But, there is greater dignity in being ourselves. So our motto must always be " be ourselves ". Alexander, so kind of you to have visited this hub and commented so insightfully. Thank you very much.

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      A great hub which I thoroughly enjoyed .

      Thanks for sharing and voted up.

      Eddy.

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Eiddwen, the more I delve into myself, the more I become convinced that whatever significant, substantial and blissful we crave for is within us. The world looks brilliant or dull due to our own perceptions of it. So kind of you to have visited this hub and appreciated so nicely. Thank you.

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      Anan Celeste 3 years ago from California

      powerful indeed, magnificent at its core!

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      Harish Mamgain 3 years ago from India

      Anan, so nice of you to have stopped by, read the poem, appreciated it and offered such kind comments. Thank you very much.

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