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Ocean: The Mystery

Updated on August 9, 2017

The ocean is a mystery

Far deeper then

What the mind

Can see

It holds layers and layers

Of depth

Reminicent of

The soul

If you sit in silence

With the ocean

You may uncover

The deep inner

Depths and

The gentle mystery

That resides within


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      Caroline Marie 6 days ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Rasma. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 days ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely poetry with nice imagery.

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      Demas W Jasper 8 days ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      "Far deeper then What the mind Can see"

      "The the soul..."

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      Caroline Marie 8 days ago from Close to Heaven

      Thank you Ryan. I am glad that you liked it. :)

      Thank you Eric. Yes that's amazing! I am happy you enjoyed it. :)

      Thank you Demas for letting me know. :)

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      Demas W Jasper 8 days ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Needs your next proofread. Don't hurry your postings here.

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      Eric Dierker 8 days ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Challenger Deep at 36,070 feet, and Mt. Everest at 29,035 feet high. Isn't that cool?

      This poetry was just what I needed this morning it really has a nice flow to it. Thank you.

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      Ryan Fuller 8 days ago from Louisiana, USA

      It is amazing that there are still areas of the deep blue sea we have never seen or touched. Never explored. It makes you wonder what else is down there. Great poem. I really enjoyed this one.