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Ode to Chocolates. A Sonnet-Ode

Updated on March 2, 2017
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Manatita is an esteemed author living in London, UK. He writes spiritual books, flash fiction and esoteric poetry, his favourite genre.

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Ode to Chocolates. A Sonnet-Ode

I first saw you on my baby sister’s face,

In the sunset of the evening.

She was licking her fingers,

Cute tongue darting in and out, like lovers,

Enjoying your sweet, dark liquid from around her lips.

Tempted, I grabbed a bit of you and tasted…

Ummmm! So succulent! So alluring!

Now oblivious to the expected cries of the five-yr. old,

I held on as you tantalised my taste buds,

Charmed your way into my stomach like sugarcane juice.

Only more addictive, scrumptious, persuasive…,

As I grab your remnants from my little sister's hand.

Ah! My dark chocolate! How you soothe my stresses,

On long weary journeys, of unrequited love.


-Manatita, The Lantern Carrier.©Copyrighted, 26th February, 2017.

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      manatita44 3 months ago from london

      Ah. You found one. Excellent!

      Use the dark ones. Not so tasty but good for you. Thanks.

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      Ryan Fuller 3 months ago from Louisiana, USA

      Great work, now I want some chocolate. And it has been proven to relieve stress and is good in moderation for health, especially dark chocolate. This was a delicious article. And now I must find myself a piece of chocolate.

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      manatita44 6 months ago from london

      Yes, Shauna.

      You're different all right? In a nice way. keep it up. Loving thoughts.

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      Shauna L Bowling 6 months ago from Central Florida

      This is such a diversion from your usual fare, Manatita. I love it! I guess I'm weird; I don't have an affinity for chocolate like many people and most women do.

      A co-worker (whose office is next to mine) and I both keep candy dishes on our desks so our officemates can help themselves. Hers always has chocolate in it. Right now, mine has Whoppers malted milk speckled eggs in it. That tells you something, huh?

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      manatita44 6 months ago from london

      Ha ha, Shaloo. Loved the way you expressed it. Thank you. Hari Om!

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      Shaloo Walia 6 months ago

      When it comes to chocolates, resistance is futile...Loved your poem!

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      manatita44 6 months ago from london

      Hello, my friend. I've been back about two weeks or so. Great to see you. Much Love.

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      vasantha t k 6 months ago

      Manatita , nice ode to chocolates. I too like them.

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      manatita44 6 months ago from london

      Thank you, Alicia. Cute!

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      Linda Crampton 6 months ago from British Columbia, Canada

      This is humorous, Manatita! It was very nice to read an ode to chocolate, which is one of my friends.

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      manatita44 7 months ago from london

      Thank you Bro. Alluring, yes. Nice word. Cheers.

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      Venkatachari M 7 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      I am not an addict. I very rarely come across chocolates. Only to gift somebody, I purchase it. When my sons were small, we used to purchase at times for them.

      The poem is very alluring and nice.

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      manatita44 7 months ago from london

      Eric,

      Funny, I thought of that, so I made her three years old. LOL. Anyway, the purpose here was to do a lite one; a humorous one. My first chocolate one is funny, but for the second, I deliberately wanted to add more elegance; more panache ... (chuckle) Thank you so much!

      Me, too Dee,

      whounuwho,

      God's blessings in return and so nice to hear from you! Still active? Yes, the bar set by the experts changes from time to time. Thank you so much and have a great weekend.

      Praise God it's mostly at work. Thank you so much!

      Ruby,

      Didn't I send you one? My 'sis' is in Texas and I only hear when I write. So many of my friends are like that. They like to hear but they do not write.

      I almost used that word in the poem.(succulent) Wish I had now. Ha ha. Have a great weekend, my Dear.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 7 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Chocolate, the succulent sweet that I crave! Did you buy your sis a box of chocolates for Valentine Day? Good for you!

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      whonunuwho 7 months ago from United States

      Nice piece here my friend. They say that chocolate may well be a healthy addition to our diets and actually help prevent some medical problems. Of course, things are always changing and coffee is harmful one minute, chocolate is not good for you...then all of a sudden, they are so wonderful. Let's enjoy our coffee and chocolate and remember that everything we eat or drink is okay within a limit of intake. Blessings my friend. whonu

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 7 months ago from The Caribbean

      I'm also a chocolate addict. "Ummmm! So good! Such delight!" Good job!

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      Eric Dierker 7 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Taking candy from a baby -- how bad is that? Lol. I do not keep chocolate in the house. Or should I say, if there is chocolate in the house -- just give it ten minutes and there won't be any.

      Nicely done friend.

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      manatita44 7 months ago from london

      Ha ha ha. Sweet chuckle. I indulge when at work. Hard to avoid with all these women I work with (smile) Gratitude.

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      Bill Holland 7 months ago from Olympia, WA

      I admit it, I'm addicted, and no, I don't want intervention! LOL