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Off To The Showers And My Troubles Will Soon Get Washed Down The Drain

Updated on September 16, 2010

It Just Took A Little Time

I have taken all I can take

I have listened all night to what I can not do

With willpower and knowledge by my side

The new day will be better than the old one I just know

I can curse and complain but it will do no good

Instead I will rise from the highest spot and look for my new vantage point

Looking into an old problem but with a different light

Grasping for an answer in the mist of all the sawdust I have found

Looking with such effort for a final soution that I need

When all I really do need is a better choice than the one I have

To send me on my way

To a better life and a better day

Somethings take time to discover and rebuild

For it took time to destroy what I have made for,many years

Lessons come hard and give so much anger if we let them

A better choice would be to let go of all sad emotion

Start fresh and find happiness in anything for this very moment

For this is good and you are taking the proper steps to help nourish your wounds

In time this sad feeling is not only going to be forgotten and erased

But banished for years to come



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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick I appreciate that more than you know.I write something once,twice and MAYBE 8 times before I get it right.I use tO save all my rough drafts just incase I ever wanted to go back and change something.Now with the computer age I can type and not save anything.I kind of miss the process of rewriting over and over again.But having less clutter is more important.I can never throw away my writings because I feel they are a special part of me.Now I am just happy to see my writings where others can try to understand my feelings and thoughts.Sometimes I know what I feel but I probably loose the readers because I want to say so much.If I DO CONFUSE YOU please feel free to tell me so I CAN EXPLAIN MY WILD WORLD OF POSITIVE THOUGHTS!!!!Then maybe with your help I can learn from my mistakes and become a better writer.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      That´s a lovely thing to say. Thank you. I read all your work because you uplift me so much. You put thoughts down in words so well.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick We can only do the best we are capable of and many times it doesn't seem enough at the time.Life can feel like we have been cut with a sharp knife and when we bleed the blood won't stop.With patience and fortitude things will be better.When I hear from you things are better already.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 7 years ago from Great Britain

      O dear. ! Beautiful but poignant, sad.