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Oh Jane ~ Don't fade away :(

Updated on July 16, 2010

The little piano spoke of distress

And the little pain that makes the body ache

It howled in broken notes unable to comprehend

The scars that he left upon her skin unable to mend

It mumbled about the void

And as he played through

It turned to be like a humanoid

The violin joined the masquerade

Unable to fend the demons of the past

And so they cried all together

The harp and the violin

Each about a tragedy

The dark unholy moment undone

Searching some pain to fend

They fell into each other’s arms

Broken and depressed

Feeling hopelessness’s distresss

Oh Jane, sweet Jane

Why did you have to fade

Why did you have to join the Fates?

And leave me

And so,

All the demons that conquer her fragile heart

And with broken dreams laid on the floor

They played broken strings from

The land of the dead

About lovely Jane

Who has met her death

The ice filled the violin’s strings

And as it trembled in pain

It showed no will for its heart

It sunk in treacherous silence once more

And as the little string that held her to life


She found no other way to go

Oh Jane, The pain has gotten through

And no more words can let it out

So few have felt your pain

Oh Jane

And as they both sang

The two broken strings

Oh hopes and Dreams

The words never even got through

Silence’s gates

And they all had to give up

Alas !!!

Unjust life, what have you done?

How could you be so cruel?

How could you be so unjust?

For there was no more to cut

All will to live have been robbed

And Jane lovely Jane

Had to fade

And they both lay on the floor

Broken and hurt

Yet this time

No word can be said

They both crossed to the other side

Unable to hide the pain inside

Oh Jane with those pale jade eyes

How come you tremble in distress?

As life crumples your hopes

And smudges your face in the mud

How come you’re always in a black dress

As life makes you scramble on your feet

And I so you burn in tears

Alone on those dark nights

And so pain’s daggers make you weep

With their little mind games

That makes you kneel

Oh Jane how could have I not seen

That it was the distress that spoke

How could I not see the beauty

In those little scars of life

How could I not see all way

Through that little tainted love

Oh Jane if only I could turn back time

If only I could claim you mine

And if only I could tell you

That I was wrong, dreadfully wrong

And I played the jury and the judge at

The same time

If only I could hold you

And cry the sorrow out

And if only never turns to reality

When dealing with treacherous time

If only I could tell you

How much I love you

Oh Jane whose eyes speak

Of sorrow and pain

Crucified by the treacherous despair

With all life form draining in the air

How come you cry

And now one listens

I bid you farewell Yet I curse

The fates who have robbed you from me

And I cry for you as my

Soul yearns and screams for you

And on cold nights like those I call out

How come you fall into the dark

Where my arms aren’t there to catch you”


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    • Uriel profile imageAUTHOR


      7 years ago from Lebanon

      Mentalist acer, thank you for your comment. It reminds me of moments of emptiness sometimes.

      Blaise25, it is never too late. Find beauty and cling to it. Never give up!

    • blaise25 profile image

      Fehl Dungo 

      8 years ago from close to you...

      That was so painful..well written. Is it really too late?

    • Mentalist acer profile image

      Mentalist acer 

      8 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      An etherialy and distopicaly beautiful of your best Uriel!;)


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