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Please tell me why

Updated on August 22, 2012
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Why ?


In the stream of life, quiet and calm

why did you threw, pebbles of solace and charm?

The lake of emotions was dormant and dim

Why did you made the whirls of hope to spin?

You made this heart again to respire,

awakened then up all reposing desires

Why did your arms you extended and espoused?

for my body, so meek and frail out

My feet that had already lost their walk and sane

why did you helped them move once again?

My dreams were tired and in dejected plight

why did you gave them wings with flight ?

You took my hands and made me fly

In the sky of hopes that was blue and bright

Alas the revenge and this enemity, why?

you bequest then my hands in the mid of flight!

Now there is no earth and no blue sky, I can see,

dreams all shattered and hurt are left for me

Why this kill? O you please come and tell

why did you gave me the love for hell ?

why did you gave me the love for hell ??


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    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      5 years ago from Delhi

      Thankyou sky2day, for reading my poem & your comment of great solace....though a late reply. but believe me, its from my heart ..your words are miraculously comforting me everytime i read it !...God Bless you dear!!

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      skye2day 

      5 years ago from Rocky Mountains

      shara, Wow such emotion. I could relate to the pain. We will suffer trials and persecution! In that God promises He will never leave nor forsake us. In time

      we can look back and see it is all for His good purpose and Glory. Sometimes what seems a gift was not good for us. God knows the big picture. One day we have the hope and the promise of no more pain no more tears. Christ has paid the price for us!!

      Easy, not always but Gods amazing Grace picks us up and He does carry us. My Love, Skye

      Love you works dear woman!

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      5 years ago from Delhi

      Thankyou all...

      Dream On , for the read & feeling the emotions on the level they are expressed about!

      Eiddwen dear, your comments are really precious to me.

      Nell rose, your mere presence gives grace to my page..and your comment, so encouraging..thankyou dear!

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      5 years ago from Delhi

      dghbrh, many thanks for the read & lovely comments ,.. love the way of expressing ur liking here....ur comments are deeply appreciated & you are always welcome dear !

      Shara

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      5 years ago from Delhi

      Thankyou DebB..its a poem of my own sufferings...and you know,

      'as hard you undergo & endure the pain ..so intense comes out the feelings from deep that gives power to your words of expression!!

      you loved & shared my poem on FB , I'm really feeling obliged ..thankyou so much dear!!

      Shara

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      Nell Rose 

      5 years ago from England

      Such a powerful poem, many women say a similar thing too! voted up!

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      DREAM ON 

      5 years ago

      Your words powerful and strong.Thanx for sharing.

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      Eiddwen 

      5 years ago from Wales

      Thanks for sharing this heart rending poem.So very powerful and I vote up and share.

      Eddy

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      DREAM ON 

      5 years ago

      You throw me into deep thought.Lots of emotion and a poem I will read many times giving me new meanings each time.Thanx for sharing.

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      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      A heady fusion of some raw pain here so emotionally expressed. I just loved the poem very much dear as u have poured your heart out in this one. Many thanks for sharing it and i am sharing also. All vote sup excluding the funny part.

      Thank you

      deergha

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Shara.. I had to read this twice.. what an emotional poem.. it pulled me in and oh my I cried and it makes you wonder

      why did you give me the love for hell..

      what a line

      I am sharing on Facebook and pinning

      many blessings

      Debbie

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      5 years ago from Delhi

      @ 50 caliber, first of all i'm really very sorry Sir for my late response...actually i was almost dormant on Hubpages since last two months & the reason was my busy schedule in other important chores.... anyways, now i've gone through your comment & i'm immensly thankful to you for sparing your time for my hub and commenting upon so gracefully...i'm honoured sir...Thankyou & Regards ,

      shara

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      50 Caliber 

      5 years ago from Arizona

      Hi Shara, I liked this poem or Ode? which I don't know, I'll leave that for the classifiers, I'm just a rater and voted you up for this writing as it it brought thought to the places my mind wanders,

      Peace and Blessings,

      dust

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      6 years ago from Delhi

      Dyhannah, Thank you for the visit and comment, well appreciated!

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      Dyhannah 

      6 years ago from Texas

      Keep asking and keep writing. Interesting poem and voted up.

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      6 years ago from Delhi

      Time pacifies all hurts but the unanswered questions remains there always, and give birth to a poem !....... Thank you for the visit and comment !

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      Nithya Venkat 

      6 years ago from Dubai

      Many questions, seeking answers very well expressed. Great poem and voted up.

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      6 years ago from Delhi

      The plants that bear more sweet fruits stoopes over humbly, so are the great men.... and your words defining this mightiness very well !

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      6 years ago from Delhi

      The palnts that bear more sweet fruits stoopes over humbly, so are the great men.... and your words defining this mightiness very well !

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      rust 

      6 years ago from East Texas Woods

      Shara don't pay me any attention. I'm still just having a little fun with my very pretentious new designation as a Level 1 Commentator. No one ever gets it but what the heck! Some people just shouldn't be given power.

      The poem's great though.

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      6 years ago from Delhi

      I appreciate your insightful comment. i'm just a learner with a motive to improve, and my visitors with their observations give them a move!

      Thankyou rust!

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      rust 

      6 years ago from East Texas Woods

      Way off in them Old East Texas Woods we understand what this beautiful poem is about. HubPages for me are now just about Repeat Random Visits, and I'm mechanically designated now to keeping up with you while you were running through another old parking lot hotel. So keep your writing semi-sacred, and then that's all, apparently. Yes this poem is worth several looks and some tuning.

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      6 years ago from Delhi

      thankyou girish, your fostering comment really means to me !

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      6 years ago from Delhi

      thankyou anglnwu, for the read & comment as well!

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      Girish puri 

      6 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      I am touched, ' why did you give the love for hell ' awesome. keep writing

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      anglnwu 

      6 years ago

      Thanks for sharing--the emotions are raw and real.

    • shara63 profile imageAUTHOR

      Farhat 

      6 years ago from Delhi

      Time forwards but the scar remains..and the irony, you have to move with all memories intact!.....thankyou for the read & commenting upon!

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      Oh my! If there is any good to be had in this, you did capture pain, betrayal and confusion

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