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On Covered Moss

Updated on August 8, 2013

Poetry ..On covered moss


A forgotten trail .. in forest ...

lay

a beautiful place,

where...we used to play

broken planks ..

across covered moss ..

where our hearts once shined ..

like natures gloss

I came back... to find my heart ..

to this place

where we did part

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      What an incredible spot well described with well written verse. Jamie

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      Dim Flaxenwick 3 years ago from Great Britain

      Hi there. This is gorgeous.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you for the follow ..Jamie.. and your wonderful comment .. glad to follow you too

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dim .. long time has passed since I heard your words .. thank you for the comment my dear..

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      Sparklea 3 years ago from Upstate New York

      voted up and beautiful. The picture is phenomenal, goes perfectly with the words. I often return to places I have been years ago, I pause, reflect and relive the moments. I am still doing it. And I always will. Blessings always Sparklea :)

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Sparklea.. yes... to return to what was once was... helps to show us the reality.. of who we once were ..

      appreciate your visit . great comment .!

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      Sparklea 3 years ago from Upstate New York

      my pleasure :)

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      the pleasure of your visit is all mine Sparklea.. :))

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      I think I have been there and I am never going back! lol

      Very sweet words. ^

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Lol... Jackie .. thanks for the comment my dear..

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Very lovely, Michael! Yes, I return to my childhood home every now and then and just think about those times so long ago, but seem just like yesterday. The funny thing is that when I return, it is just not the same in all aspects as when I was a child. It is lovely sometimes to reflect back, and sometimes it is so very painful.

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      Really beautiful imagery here.

      Hugs and love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Faith .. yes ..memeories are two sides .. good and bad although we try to forget the bad ...we have a hard time remembering the good.

      love and hugs Faith ..hope all is well for you !

      Bless you Faith...

      Michael

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      beautiful poem with beautiful picture

      also made me remember how (when I was young) my cousins and I would create our little homes out in the woods and use moss for carpeting

      Thank You,

      Kim

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Kim ..

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Thank you, Michael, for asking, yes, all is well, just been publishing, and been missing seeing you on a couple of them here of late. So, I hope all is well with you too.

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I have missed some of your hubs.??? I will dispatch myself over right now .. we can't have that my dear Faith ...I wonder why I was not notified..??

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely memories - and the photo is so great - evocative, too.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you blossom .. my faithful hubber..

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