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On Jutting Edge/ Flowers Waiting

Updated on July 1, 2013

I stood alone mind so free

on jutting edge.. it was meant to be

Looking out ...among the land,

wishing you were there

just to hold my hand

Swollen river.. of lost hope and tears

flowing downward...taking all my fears

curving .. bending ..which way to go

my heart flows softly... down below

On jutting edge.. I make my stand

wishing I ...could change this land

A beauty deep and colored scene

all I want do is scream

Flowers look across the sky... in a vase and wonder why

the pussy willows... they do weep

while all the others, they do sleep

while sitting... waiting for the one

the love that comes...only from the sun

Looking as I sat... among my friends

The rocks... we always make amends

We see the beauty... from the docks

as the time slowly... tick tocks

The sea in and out does flow...

covering .. filling...our lonely view

while we sit and wait only for you

the moss grows thick...upon our souls

hard round rocks... we sit like ghouls


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    • cleaner3 profile image

      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I am fine Faith ..thanks for your concern..!


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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Been hearing the news of the flooding in Colorado, so just checking in to see if you are okay this day. See where you have not published in a couple of days.

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Mhatter.. thanks for your comments .. great observation of moods.and lonliness.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dearest Faith .. thank you for your kind comments my friend. I thought you would like this , actually it was just one poem i wrote after seeing the picture and then seen the other painting of the flowers in the vase, which inspired me to write the other poem . it was a contrast of moods . Well... now i have to try to write one that will be your next favorite , but come back and visit this one all you want. ..

      Love and hugs ..


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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Nice delivery. I feel you have painted moods... changing. thank you

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Dearest Michael!!!

      This is absolutely stunning . . . beyond words. I believe this is my new favorite. WOW just beautiful, really, really beautiful.

      I just want to read it over and over.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing of course!

      Hugs and love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      lambservant.. thank you for the kind comments.. I really appreciate them and your visit.


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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie .. thank you for the visit and the comment.

      a double entendre I tied together after seeing pictures Salvador Dali painted with many pictures within a picture.

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      Lori Colbo 4 years ago from Pacific Northwest

      Completely lovely.

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Very pretty, waiting for a loved one...with scenic description.