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On versing!

Updated on July 19, 2014

scar!

scarlet...

The pricks of a quill

Oozing out

Letter-drops

Cause pain

To the paper canvas

As it bleeds;

Gradually

Flowing into words

Form

A stretch of cut-lines

To pool into

A curious poem!

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      pochinuk 3 years ago

      sujaya,

      Nice.

      Very reddish; impulsive.

      Got to get that word down at all costs.

      I can relate to what your poem is saying.

      -pochinuk

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      vibe dear

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      loveofnight 3 years ago from Baltimore, Maryland

      i really like your take on this.....the paper canvas as it bleeds. this poem left me wanting more.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      sure love

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      Tim Mitchell 3 years ago from Escondido, CA

      I like this presentation of words striking the poet's heart and the audience's. One must savor the scent, taste its delicacy, and then ponder. Reminds me of difference - happy and happiness.

      tim

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx tsm

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