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On a Smoky Night

Updated on August 1, 2013

I saw your energy... go crackling by
in the red and purple sky
it looked like fire .. it was so bright
it happened on a smoky night


I waited and felt.... your ghostly sphere..
as it floated so very near
there along this lonely road
our souls did meet
it was foretold..


From long ago
and ages past
then it was gone ..
the dream... did not last


My mind does haunt

as your spirit sings...

on golden lights

and earthly rings

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Kim .. your comment is great.!

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      While there is this mysterious quality, there seems to be a love story waiting to be revealed. If it is a dream, what a hauntingly romantic one.

      So nicely done when you leave the reader wanting more.

      Best to you,

      Kim

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Mary .. for the comment and the visit.

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      I think Blossom is right, this one is a bit different...but still you make it beautiful and though provoking.

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      This one is different, a great idea and you express it so well. Love the pics, too.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank yu Rochelle .. interesting ..?? that is an interesting answer..

      tried to read your work on Google but it would not come through ..

      Sorry ..send me an excerpt here so I can see it.!

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      It's very interesting with lovely pictures :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Martin..

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. thank you Faith for the visit and the comment ..

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      I have been told about those skies. This makes your wonderful poem wonderfully chilling to me.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Yes, this is oh so mysterious and very interesting, dearest Michael, on that smokey night . . . really beautiful imagery here as to what lies beyond this earthly realm, possibly.

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Wayne .. I also love the pictures..

      your comments are appreciated

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      Wayne Barrett 4 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      Haunting, mysterious...I like it. The picture accompaniment made me feel the words.