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On azuring our love!

Updated on February 10, 2016

Your natural risible disposition

a good riposte

to my cheerful nature is,

my dear!

Ritz not me,

your lover,

a venturous spirit,

with such so sweet nature;

a riotous rip-roaring stream of moments

is on the cards, my darling;

pull off your vibrancy fast,

my love,

to plunge into the splashing waters of delight,

a high heaven in the low sea,

as we hold the breath of love

beneath the dazzling blue lines!

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    • shanmarie profile image

      shanmarie 19 months ago

      Definitely attention grabbing. I agree with Flourish

    • FlourishAnyway profile image

      FlourishAnyway 19 months ago from USA

      Your combination of words is interesting. Some I've never heard of, others not in this context. Surely interesting.

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq Man Gyp

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 22 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Wonderful poem.

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      Manatita

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      sujaya venkatesh 22 months ago

      tnq Man

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      Tremendous gift! Dazzlingly brilliant! I hear you! Jai to the Bard of Poetry Supreme!