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On viewing love!

Updated on August 13, 2015
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Far more appealing

seems

hypermetropic vision of love

than the myopic one

that makes the one stricken

stare closely

at the intricacies of relationship,

the bond mostly scanning

all possible doubts and suspicions

and further

hyper-endocrining

incredible oozing of internal bleeding

causing shades of trauma

to be placated

at all costs!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Marl

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      Marlene Bertrand 2 years ago from Northern California, USA

      Definitely written by a scholar. Beautiful use and flow of words.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq so much Blo

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Another very clever use of words in your poem. Love it!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq you for your motivating words Drm

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      DREAM ON 2 years ago

      You have a very extensive vocabulary. I have to do some research to dive into your words. Very interesting.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Lar

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      Larry Rankin 2 years ago from Oklahoma

      Wonderful poem..