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On watering love!

Updated on June 24, 2015
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Falling in love

is like

crossing a smooth stream

with flowers of smiles and adoration afloat;

in due course

it gaps into a wide river

causing little doubts and fears,

that invariably expands

as a deep sea

giving heartaches and deep sighs

to voyage through tears

that augment

to form a playful ocean

of pleasure and delight

sans

suspicion of any kind!

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Good poem Sujaya. Well done.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Jo for your consistent support

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      Kamalesh050 2 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Beautiful poem - loved it.

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      Larry Rankin 2 years ago from Oklahoma

      Great analogy!

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      haikutwinkle 2 years ago

      Love is beautiful indeed

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Hai Lar Kam

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      Nithya Venkat 2 years ago from Dubai

      Great write, beautifully expressed.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Vel

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