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On your way back!

Updated on November 19, 2015
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Scaling to new heights of glory

the strong rungs below

were left

bent, broken and forgotten,

repair

seemed a deaf word

to the ladder;

a climb down

post a culmination reach

foresaw

a drastic miserable fall

resulting in broken bones

with minimal recuperative chances!

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      sujaya venkatesh 18 months ago

      tnq Aes

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      Mary Norton 19 months ago from Ontario, Canada

      Enjoyed your poem. It draws the depth is me.

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      sujaya venkatesh 20 months ago

      true Gyp

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 20 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Thought provoking poem indeed.

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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Lar

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      Larry Rankin 21 months ago from Oklahoma

      Great poem.

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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Ven

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      Venkatachari M 21 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      What a wonderful poem! In so simple, rich and deep meaning words. It needs much grasping power to think or digest.

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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq for your supporting statements Man Dan

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      Dana Tate 21 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Different from your usual poems of love. I like seeing this new side of you.

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      manatita44 21 months ago from london

      Deeper one. Perhaps it can imply that one should never look back, for like Lots wife, there is a great potential for becoming a pillar of salt.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 21 months ago

      tnq Erc rr swa

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      Shaloo Walia 21 months ago

      thought-provoking!

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      Rikta 21 months ago from Dhaka.

      Yes, to be continue.

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      Eric Dierker 21 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Well done. Leaves me to think.