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One Last Peak At My Day Before Bed

Updated on July 13, 2012

How Much Can I Still Squeeze In ?

Today was no dfferent than any other day

I tried to get so much done in so little time

After the the light disappears i know my time is winding down

It is only a matter of a few hours and a new day will begin

There were some unexpected surprises that created a little adrenaline rush

Then again most of my days have the same tone

Which isn't a bad thing

I have been blessed to see more than ninety seven % of my days go smooth

Because I have been healthy all my life I don't have any health concerns

A have been working hard and trying to do my personal best

My eyes are tired and it is time to give them a rest

This is where you come in and take over where I left off

Good luck and may your day be more than you ever expected

What will become of this day once its over

Will it be one we can remember with pride

One that has been swept under the rug to hide

A blurr that passed by

A treasure that has been opened and each day more riches to explore

Only you and me know the difference

From heaven and hell

What will it be ?

I can only wait to see


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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      raciniwa I gladly will.I try to do as much as I can in the time allowed.Sometimes I do less and try to take in the feelings of the day without all the clutter.I find it hard to separate the two.Off to read and learn more.Thanx so much for sharing.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      please let me know what's the turn out of this observation...

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      moonlake With a beautiful world waiting in the wings.I would love to see you fly.Then as I look up I can wave to you and see how you found something amazing.You are laughing and smiling uncontrollably.Now that is the way to live and you do that so effortlessly.Thanx for reading and spending the time to post on this wonderful morning.

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      moonlake 5 years ago from America

      Enjoyed your poem. Very nice. Voted Up.

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Debrorah Brooks I am so happy when I bring a smile to someones face.I can only dream it is as big as mine.So many things in life make people sad.I can not erase that feeling if I tried.So I hope people change their feelings by themself with just a little help.I want to thank you for finding the time to read another thought I believe.Enjoy your day.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      this is a beautiful poem.. I really love your poems.. Your poems make me smile.



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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick I thank you but I think your thank you button is stuck.My life hasn't turned out exactly the way I have planned.So I keep going back to my memories and see where my thoughts led me wrong.Correcting as I go and then moving on.Hopefully this time I will end up where I want to be a little off center but happier than I have ever been.My day starts from scratch and so far I just have one big mess but it is still early yet.I am excited just to try.Thanx and hope to be beaming with excitement soon.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

      Thank you, thank you, thank you..xxxxxxx

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick I hope you also know you have my attitude.It flows with every possitive word you speak.It sits and waits to rise above any misfortune or mistake.Think good and that is the secret that brings more thoughts from hiding.Think wonderful and your thoughts come riding a horse and buggy.Think amazing your thoughts our flying in a plane above.Think incredible your thoughts have met other thoughts and are forming a band to go marching down the street.As always you are more special than you will ever know.Reading one of my thoughts and carrying it with you more than five minutes makes me smile .

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      Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

      That was bautiful in its own strange way. I love your attitude- I know I have told you many times. That´s because I would love to have at least half of your positivity.

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      shiningirisheyes I couldn't agree more.I will be on it as soon as I get a chance.acaetnna I try and then I try some more.What I like most is writing and hearing myself think.Thanx so much and have the best kind of day there is.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      You always speak from your heart and I admire that.

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Requiring a follow up here friend!!! Great way to leave me in suspense.

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      kj force My body had reached it's limit.My eyes just shut and said enough is enough.I went off to sleep.Thanx for the read and soon I will gain some energy and be at it again.(lol)

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      DREAM ON...unexpected surprises that created aderaline rush..? and you leave us hanging ? come on that's not kosher....hope you Friday the 13th goes better..hehhe