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One Point

Updated on December 17, 2010

Can you tell me,

Life has hit you hard?

From heartbreak to death

you bring down your head..

Listening to you yourself.


You know if you could

You'd scream like you should,

the truth about everything.


You can sense it

So can she,

So why can't you two let this be?


Loudness hits minds

that cruise over time

Thinkin' this was as deep as Titanic.

But she doesn't listen,

or maybe she does

She just doesn't want this to be.


I'll live through the sorrow

and wait for tomorrow

for you are the one that I need,

and if you say no

baby I won't let go

I'll love you 'till you're right next to me.

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      poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      How perfect I read this on Saint Valentine's Day. It's a very beautiful poem and so appropriate for the holiday.

      Happy Valentine's Day.