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One Thought (poem)

Updated on January 22, 2013

Her beauty is the light that sparks the day

He is the dream I had again last night

She walks along my pathways of delight

And if he said hello what would I say


To hold her hands a crazy thought you’re right

And if he kissed me fancies set astray

If I said hi would I be cast away

Another dream would wither far from sight


How cruel and foolish insecurity

Two lovers lost and floating in the wind

With one common thought that was shared by two


There somewhere in time together they’d be

And so much had passed as they sweetly grinned

Remember those days I loved only you


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      Indian Chef 

      5 years ago from New Delhi India

      Very Nice and beautiful poem.

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      6 years ago from Edinburgh

      Beautiful words.

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      6 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Reminds me of a high school reunion, for some reason, but it's beautiful nonetheless. So is the song - I remember it. Voted up.

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      Karen Silverman 

      6 years ago

      Mmmmmemories made yummmmmmy...

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      6 years ago

      Simply, lovely, and that's all I'm going to say.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just beautiful Would be lovely to relive the best moments of young love.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Young love, very beautiful my poet friend..Cheers

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      Deb Hirt 

      6 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Ah, yes, days gone by...thanks for the memories.

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      Thomas Silvia 

      6 years ago from Massachusetts

      This poem is so beautifully written and with such feelings !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Olde Cashmere 

      6 years ago

      Really enjoy reading your poetry Mhatter, always impressive work. Voted up, beautiful, and interesting :)

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      Midnight Lights 

      6 years ago from USA

      Reminds me when I was a teenager and had those insecurities.. When I got older and less insecure I went right back to that guy and asked him out! It didn't last long, but I'm so happy I still tried. :) Failure is just a word, you only truly fail if you don't ever try. ;) Good job reminding me of my youth... but not my adult life lol :P

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      6 years ago from Delhi

      Romantic poetry is your proprietary....Mhatter, you excell !

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      6 years ago

      Mhatter as always , you write the best romantic poem.

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      6 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!! are just so brilliant......loved this romantic and beautifully woven. up voting ans shared.

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      Michelle Liew 

      6 years ago from Singapore

      Great work, MHatter, romance poetry at its most sincere. A great, creative job!

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      Joshua Zerbini 

      6 years ago from Pennsylvania


      Beautifully amazing here buddy!

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      6 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautifully written! Such nice flow, and you painted a very vivid picture of young love, and the feelings later on in life.

      Voting up......

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      Terrye Toombs 

      6 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      A beautiful, dreamy poem, Mhatter. :)

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      6 years ago from Alabama


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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      MHatter,, I agree with Patty.. your poems and you are amazing. I love love poems and you are a master at it.. hugs



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      6 years ago from Kentucky

      What a final line! You did a great job of changing the entire complexion of the poem in only a few words.

      Great Job and Great Poem!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Your poems amaze me!!! Awesome Job!!!!


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