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One Thought (poem)

Updated on January 22, 2013

Her beauty is the light that sparks the day

He is the dream I had again last night

She walks along my pathways of delight

And if he said hello what would I say

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To hold her hands a crazy thought you’re right

And if he kissed me fancies set astray

If I said hi would I be cast away

Another dream would wither far from sight

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How cruel and foolish insecurity

Two lovers lost and floating in the wind

With one common thought that was shared by two

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There somewhere in time together they’d be

And so much had passed as they sweetly grinned

Remember those days I loved only you

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Your poems amaze me!!! Awesome Job!!!!

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      What a final line! You did a great job of changing the entire complexion of the poem in only a few words.

      Great Job and Great Poem!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      MHatter,, I agree with Patty.. your poems and you are amazing. I love love poems and you are a master at it.. hugs

      sharing

      debbie

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      lovely.

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      Terrye Toombs 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      A beautiful, dreamy poem, Mhatter. :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Beautifully written! Such nice flow, and you painted a very vivid picture of young love, and the feelings later on in life.

      Voting up......

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mhatter99,

      Beautifully amazing here buddy!

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Great work, MHatter, romance poetry at its most sincere. A great, creative job!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Mhatter......you are just so brilliant......loved this one.....so romantic and beautifully woven. up voting ans shared.

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      Angelme566 4 years ago

      Mhatter as always , you write the best romantic poem.

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      Romantic poetry is your proprietary....Mhatter, you excell !

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      Midnight Lights 4 years ago from USA

      Reminds me when I was a teenager and had those insecurities.. When I got older and less insecure I went right back to that guy and asked him out! It didn't last long, but I'm so happy I still tried. :) Failure is just a word, you only truly fail if you don't ever try. ;) Good job reminding me of my youth... but not my adult life lol :P

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Really enjoy reading your poetry Mhatter, always impressive work. Voted up, beautiful, and interesting :)

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      This poem is so beautifully written and with such feelings !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Ah, yes, days gone by...thanks for the memories.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Young love, very beautiful my poet friend..Cheers

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just beautiful Would be lovely to relive the best moments of young love.

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Simply, lovely, and that's all I'm going to say.

      Jan

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      Mmmmmemories made yummmmmmy...

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Reminds me of a high school reunion, for some reason, but it's beautiful nonetheless. So is the song - I remember it. Voted up.

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      Karina 4 years ago from Edinburgh

      Beautiful words.

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      Indian Chef 4 years ago from New Delhi India

      Very Nice and beautiful poem.

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