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Open Your Eyes My Friend

Updated on October 13, 2011

Open your eyes my friend
So that you can see
The man you say you love
Was unfaithful indeed

What he's doing to you
Was a constant of lies
Betrayal behind
Your closed eyes

Sweet words of lies
Poisonous you consume
Words that untrue
You believed to be true

Eating your feeling up
Like silent spreading disease
And flames ignite the sky
But still you couldn't see

Open your eyes my friend
I want to show what you need to see
The man you say you loved
Betrayed you, do you see?

In this world there's lies and deceit
How can you believe what lays before his feet
Spoken words of sweet you fall to believed
But how do you know if this is exactly what he feel?

Secret hidden lies
Unfaithful, betrayal, dishonest, and false
He was the spear
That goes through your heart

Emotion bottled inside
My friend that's what I feel
Pain overflowing my mind
To see my best friend lover commit a horrifying love crime

I don't want you to be hurt
Nor way too late...
I want you to know
Before you become his bait


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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Chanry, thanks! :)

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      Chanry 6 years ago

      This poem is amazing. Enjoyed it.

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hello nisa,Eiddwen, and Darknlovely, thanks for commenting and reading. It's a bless to see such wondrous comment.

      Many bless


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      Annie 6 years ago from NewYork

      Brillant write... keep writing

      love my poetry.

      one love annie

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      A great poem and thank you for sharing.

      Take care


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      nisa 6 years ago

      very well written chan! and so it is true!

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Ruby, thank you. It really takes a lot of practice. :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You're getting better and better at writing poetry. Voted up......

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Lifez,ana, nasser,icciev,kamalesh, thanks for commenting. I too believe this poem is very true. Yes I will keep up the good work. Thanks for a great compliment. :)

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      Kamalesh050 6 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Beautiful poem and very true what you have written. Keep up your good work.

      Best Wishes,


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      icciev 6 years ago from Kuwait

      little dark, but well written. voted up.

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      nasseralabdali 6 years ago from Saudi Arabia

      It is wonderful! certainly,a lover should not trust the other his/her soulmate unless a ture love is in between."Love is blind". Nasser.

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      Ana Gajic 6 years ago

      Well written and well said:) Great hub:)

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      lifezprecious 6 years ago

      You have portrayed your words very effectively. Keep the good work up.