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Originality ( a poem of greatest inspiration)

Updated on December 30, 2015


The great explosion, the most original event, the beginning... its extent,

A matter of conjecture in the human mind, many thoughts to circumvent.

Twas but an ogre, playing with fire, then about this world to so conspire,

A simple accident, played by a buffoon, soon to mushroom, by all's desire.

The origin of it all...
The origin of it all...


As of this atomic world, we're all a part, all of a beginning, an original start,

A foolish accident, to seem so absurd, as a simple grunt to replace a word.

Must not there be, an more accurate account, more complex to all surmount.

No human mind, is so conferred, as a tree falls in a forest, to land, unheard.

the scope of the heavens made of the great and the small...
the scope of the heavens made of the great and the small...


Who, what, when and how, must we ask such questions, us to avow,

Does it really matter, when all began, or just how, we may understand?

Millions of eons, our keeping of time, does each count, have to rhyme,

As an accounting, each woman and man, there has to be a master plan.

every explosion has its own source...
every explosion has its own source...



Is our own universe, just one of many, not to count more than any,

Worlds within worlds, those to swirl afar, each planet, its bright star?

Could this fine craft, be an artist's domain, on high, where he must reign,

Might we each be as tiny dots in time, small particles of the molecular?



a guiding hand to tether the force...
a guiding hand to tether the force...


Should our maestro to compose us all, as his orchestration,

Its splendid musical refrain, of his, in a heavenly adulation?

This grandest architect, builder of worlds and all that's within it,

A finest sculptor of marvelous works, that of the human spirit.


the grand creator in the heavens above us,
the grand creator in the heavens above us,


We, as human kind, relate to that, relevant to all our senses,

What we see and hear, touch and feel, nature so dispenses.

Storms all have to have a reason, as rain falls in every season,

Each thunderous sound, and lightning's flash, in their cohesion.


Gave us life...finest breath, because he does love us...
Gave us life...finest breath, because he does love us...


The origin of all species, in a most humanistic regards, that of theses,

A gradual acclimation, an evolving postulation, a God it so dismisses.

Everything began as a bang, disregarding worst slang, its circumstances,

As the planets revolve about the sun, over the eons. in eternal dances.



we're given our lives by his grace...
we're given our lives by his grace...


A benevolent and most patient creator, is the falsehood eliminator,

The grandest maker and God of all, and as the finest accentuator.

Made in his image alone, not a cold hard stone, a warm perpetuator,

Formed from clay by his hands, is his evolving theory, our originator.



This our universe...the human race...and God sends his blessings to the believers or those unbelievers...all to embrace... all rights reserved and under copyright all works on this page.2015
This our universe...the human race...and God sends his blessings to the believers or those unbelievers...all to embrace... all rights reserved and under copyright all works on this page.2015

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      whonunuwho 

      2 years ago from United States

      Thank you my friend ,whonu.

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      Deb Hirt 

      2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Very well said and great pics.

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      whonunuwho 

      2 years ago from United States

      Thank you Blossom my friend and blessings. whonu

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      whonunuwho 

      2 years ago from United States

      Thank you Blossom my friend and blessings. whonu

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      whonunuwho: Lovely, uplifting poem and what a lovely collection of photos to accompany it!

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      whonunuwho 

      2 years ago from United States

      My thanks to bravewarrior and Jodah for your kind words and support. Always inspirational to me and help me to write more. Blessings. whonu

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      John Hansen 

      2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Another wonderfully inspirational poem from you whonu. As Shauna said, there are many profound lines eg:

      "Should our maestro to compose us all, as his orchestration,

      Its splendid musical refrain, of his, in a heavenly adulation?

      This grandest architect, builder of worlds and all that's within it,

      A finest sculptor of marvelous works, that of the human spirit."

      Great work.

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      2 years ago from Central Florida

      Whonu, I really love this layout. It allows me to spend time on your thoughts and "hear" them in their entirety. There are many profound lines in this poem. My favorite is, "A benevolent and most patient creator, is the falsehood eliminator".

      Beautifully done, my friend!

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