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Our Dream (poem)

Updated on May 29, 2012

Come fly

The sky

With me

And see


A stream

A dream

Come to

Our view


A star lit night

Too set moods right

Soft hearts await

To meet their fate


So why

Not try

To flee

To free


That gleam

Our dream

Come true



A moon lit light

To guide our flight

The world can wait

While we create


Creating dreams for you and I

Another windswept memory

Created on edges extreme

Where music of passion break through



To my

Soft plea

And see


The skies’ delight

Within our sight


Our dream


For two

Who knew


It’s not too late

The rest can wait


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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      This is so totally breathtaking! Incredibly beautiful, I was actually singing it with a tune of my own, it just so amazing, it tries to escape away like a bird, free...

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      WD Curry 111 5 years ago from Space Coast

      I see the moon shimmering on the water. I suppose you would have to look in the opposite direction to see it from there.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A beautiful poem and wonderful dream

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      thank you all. i'm glad you enjoy my work. i'm sorry i cannot leave better comments

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Beautifully said.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderful full poem, Voted up and beautiful.

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Thanks for sharing this very beautifully written poem !

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      Merle Ann Johnson 5 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      Great remind me of "Romancing the Stone"...poem was good too...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      Sharon Christy 5 years ago from India

      So crisp and lovely! Awesome work! Great to follow you!

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Very nice work!

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      Priscill Anne Alvik 5 years ago from Schaumburg, IL

      Erotic....I feel the secretcy of love each day. Thank you for sharing your emotions!

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      picklesandrufus 5 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      Beautiful and so alluring!! Voted up and beautiful

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. This is lovely. I can dream and I can relate to this. Love the last lines -

      It’s not too late

      The rest can wait

      I agree it's never too late when it's just right.

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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Lovely poem and a beautiful dream. Voted up.

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      This poem is absolutely beautiful.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      absolutely beautiful poem..

      I am sharing on Facebook


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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very very beautiful..Enjoyed..