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Our Life (poem)

Updated on January 30, 2015

Let’s write our life across the haloed sky

The blessing and the glory of the dawn

To show how high two hearts in love can fly

A vision fair to build a dream upon


Let’s cast our glimmer ‘cross the endless sea

The waves abide the passing passion’s flow

Another kiss a timeless memory

Has touched the shores which only lovers know


Oh can’t you feel the wonder all around

Exhilarating moments waiting there

Embraces which forever will astound

The day awaits to feel the Joy we share


Let’s spread our secret in this place in time

And share our special meaning in life’s rhyme


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      GlenR 8 months ago from UK

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Romantically wonderful.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Mhatter99....obviously you have been touched by the bug of Spring...

      Love is in the Air...beautiful...

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Visions and dreams are such a wonderful combination.

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      thost 4 years ago from Dublin, Ireland

      Very nice Martin.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Martin, this says it all. Your words portray what love should be and how it makes the heart feel. You're one of a kind, Martin!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh so wonderfully composed Martin.

      Enjoyed immensely and voted up;

      here's wishing you a wonderful day.


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      Linda Crist 4 years ago from Central Virginia

      It is clear that you have experienced great love in your lifetime as poems such as this cannot be written without experience. So beautiful! Thank you for sharing your gift with the world.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      great poem and verse Hatter .. like your style and class.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Such passion, such grace; words written that can only be understood by

      the precious few who have know a love so powerful that it leaves one in awe.

      Thank you, Martin.


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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Martin, I can feel the wonder in this poem. Written with passion and style, love the image.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Yes, holding on to that real love and never letting go is exhilarating!

      Voted up +++ and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      True love is rare if you have don't let to slip by hold on to love if you know you are happy

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      I wish...

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      Beautiful expression of love.

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      whonunuwho 4 years ago from United States

      A well expressed description of a true love and devotion between a man and a woman. Thank you for sharing. whonu