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POETRY: FOREVER

Updated on October 19, 2011
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NOT SUITABLE FOR CHILDREN UNDER 18

I make contact in her eyes


She looks back at me


As we urge for one another


Cause we both can't sleep


In that exact moment


Time stops, there is silence


I can hear my heart pounding


I hear the blink of her eye lids


As the moment now passes


My hand wonders to her thigh


She lunges forward to embrace me


I get this natural high


Our energy is chemistry


Our chemistry is sexually


As I tip the right spot


Just to hear her scream


As if I was dreaming


The world disappears


I have her creaming


Its obvious I'm feigning


To find this meaning


As she is leading


Shes all I am seeing


Her body I am seeking


As she hits on her knees


She begs me please


More, more, more


Give me what I need

Making love is transformed


Into extreme wild pleasure


A personal two becomes one


On this bed here together


We join for this endeavor


I could stay like this forever


As each second only gets better


As she and I become wetter


Our hearts join together


Is she wrong for liking leather


As the sweat rolls down


As she lays upside down


As she goes down


All the way to the ground


She makes no sound


No sound if found


To the floor she is bound


For as we join as one


On this bed here together


We join for this endeavor


I could stay.....


Just like this forever



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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Wow Hot and steamy in here. I'll be begging on my knees this evening.

      Haha when I suggested you think outside the box and maybe write a poem on coins... I certainly wasn't expecting this. You said yours didn't turn out too well... you fibber you.

      Haha well done VOTED UP YES

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      icciev 5 years ago from Kuwait

      really amazing poem and very nice words you put in their. voted up

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      Hillbilly Zen 5 years ago from Kentucky

      Wow, lyricwriter. Not suitable for children under 18 or maybe old ladies over 50! I need something cold to drink...and a cigarette!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Rosemay. I didn't think it would. I never tried this before, but it was actually fun and different. Before coming to this site, I hadn't wrote poems in many years. Songs, I have, but not poetry, although they are similar. You can walk a poem anywhere, not always the case for a song. Thanks for coming by Rosemay and your vote. You put a big smile on my face.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Icciev, thanks for the comment. I am glad you enjoyed it. It makes me feel great when someone likes what I right. So thanks. Take care.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Zen, LMAO. I can't breathe. Whoa. Your crazy! Your reckon I should put that up top as well?lol This is the very first time that I have wrote a poem such as this. I was working on it and set it down to get me a pop. When I came back to the living room, my wife is reading it and looking at me and says, "what the h*** is wrong with you?" I just began rolling, I have never laughed so hard. I am still in that silly mood as we have been up all night and then I read your post, I am trying to catch my breath. Zen, you made my day. I shall see you soon.

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      Hear Me 5 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

      Whoa! I need a cold shower after this one! Very HOT! I am going to bookmark this one when I want to get into the "mood"!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Hear Me. Thanks for checking it out. I wasn't sure how it would be taken at first, but it seems to be catchy. I thank you for your time and reading. Coming from you, it is an honor. I hope you doing good HM. It is good to hear from you and I shall catch up with you later.

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      Nell Rose 5 years ago from England

      Hi, hot hot hot! ha ha love it! and a message to Zen above. 50? FIFTY? cheeky young wipper snapper! hee hee fifty is when you just get going!......

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      Hillbilly Zen 5 years ago from Kentucky

      You're right of course, Ms. Nell...it's just one of those cold, rainy Kentucky days and my "get up and go" has done got up and went! lyricwriter, glad I made you giggle!

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      hot hot hot and voted up indeed :)

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      Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Some say love is from above,

      though,

      falling upon flesh and leather I see no Doves...

      Sensually delightful Lyrics!;)

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      Mary Hyatt 5 years ago from Florida

      All I can say is WOW, and I remember when this kind of passion was a part of my life. I lost my partner 10 years ago. You are lucky you have someone who shares in your desires and passion. I have a "hot" poem waiting in the wings for the contest! Watch for it, OK?

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Cold shower yes please, love this. Up and Awesome my heart is pounding with excitement

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      Well someone sounds like they are having a Wonderful Sex Life...and we are all enjoying the aftermath...Wow, you are so Good. I'm going into the Den to get Lover Man, and do it once again...If he can today...I'll just show him this Poem!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      I have to agree with Nell Zen. I just hope that spice is still hot when I am 50. The power of love is nothing less then remarkable. Thank you both for your comments.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Ruchira, thank you so much for visiting and voting. I hope you had fun with it.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Mentalist, you always brighten my day with your constant illuminating usage of words. I hope I spelled that right. Any who, thanks for checking it out and always for your visit friend.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Mary. So sad. I wouldn't know what to do if I lost Ashlie. I sometimes think about it, but I try living for today. I hear ya and you can bet your bottom dollar I will read it. I will keep an eye out for it! Take care and good luck with the contest.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Writer20, I am glad you enjoyed it. I wrote it to get the passion and emotion surrounding the poem. Once I have read it though, I find myself watching my wife more. lol It surprised me to be honest. Thanks for your time and see you soon.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      B Malin, oohh you naughty girl! lol I believe we need this in our love life. An extra flame in the bedroom never hurt anyone. If it builds that flame, it did its purpose. Hope you scored!lol Thanks for reading.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Sometimes not too many words are necessary. All I need to hear in the wee hours of the morning from my husband is Are you still asleep? Yeah it's always just that one interesting moment. Great way of putting it and the pics just right.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Gypsy. I can relate. It is like that song, "when you say nothing at all". It is special when you don't even need to communicate.

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      reynold jay 5 years ago

      Yep--this is steamy all right. I do know that most every major poet takles this subject and it gets fairly graphic. I remember a talk show many years ago when Rod McKewen ( Spelling may be off) went on a major Detroit talk show and ended up reading something like this! He had just written it and had to read it. The host was somewhat shocked, but ended up praising the poem.

      UP and beautiful!

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      Cloverleaf 5 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

      Is it just me or is it getting hot in here? Raunchy stuff and brilliantly written, thelyricwriter! Well done. Voting up!

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Hi TLW, HOT, HOT, HOT wow! voting up most definitely!

      Best wishes MM

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Reynold, I would of loved to see that facial expression. I stpped out of my comfort zone on this one, but I enjoyed doing it.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Cloverleaf, thank you very much. Everyone else was writing them so I figured I would give it a try. Thanks for your vote and comment. I shall see you soon.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      MM, I am much thankful for your visit. I hope you enjoyed it. This has been real interesting to me and I am glad I choose to write it.

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      Hot and sizzling. Oooo la la la ;-)

      Voted up and awesome.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Sueswan. I am glad you felt the heat! Just got in from work. Hope your doing well. I will be by soon.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 5 years ago from Lagos

      Wow! Amazing, sensual, erotic, sweet and awesome rendering of a special moment. I am still in awe. Voted awesome, beautiful, useful and interesting.

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      Manoj Kumar Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      thelyricwriter,

      Greetings from MAKUSR. The poem is hot, the photos are hotter, the meanings are hottest. Nice one.

      Lots of Love,

      MAKUSR

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Ubanichijioke, thank you so much for your always kind words my friend. It is beautiful. Making love should always be that. Hope you have a good weekend! Best wishes.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Makusr, how are you doing? Thank you so much for your expertise . Your praise is always taken to heart. I am on my way over. I need a good laugh before work!:)

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      d.william 5 years ago from Somewhere in the south

      Wow. Nice poem. I had to light a cigarette after reading it. (And i don't even smoke). L.O.L. Steamy.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Ha ha ha, d williams! :) I tell you in all honesty, my libido has increased since writing this. It really heated the both of us and I hope it can do the same for others. Thanks for you appreciation and be good.

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      jami l. pereira 5 years ago

      Very illicitly written and expressed , beautifully scribed in its steamy realm , wowww , talk to ya later , ima gonna go shower hehe ! voted up and awesome and beautiful , thanks for the read!:)

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey again Jami. Thank you for coming by and checking it out. I stepped out of the box on this one but I believe it worked and it opened up my eyes to other things.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Sensual and erotic. I wonder how could you write about making love so beautifully.

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      whoa! someones got a kinky side!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Vinaya, thanks for coming by my friend. When you really feel this way in your heart, writing the truth is very easy. It is special. I have always wrote from the heart, but I honestly believe it is a gift from God because it comes natural. I was born with it.

      Nikki, well, I guess I am:) This was the first time I ever wrote a poem like this and it was an apparent trend here on the site. I decided to try it and actually surprised myself. I was glad to step outside the box. I sure watch my wife a lot more since. She still doesn't know though:) Thanks for reading it!

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      Gary Eby 5 years ago from Cave Junction, Oregon

      Yeah, I get it. sexuality can be poetry. There is beauty in the act of intimacy. Yes to the power of Love that transforms the physical into a bond forevermore. Peace and Light...Gary.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Hey there Gary. Thanks for stopping by. This was my first attempt at this. It came out better then I thought. But making love is powerful when done in the right way.

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      DeBorrah K Ogans 5 years ago

      Thelyricwriter, This Poem has a beautiful rhythm! Lovely illustrations as well! You are absolutely correct "Making love is powerful when it is done the right way! Yes as you say "a bond forevermore!" The WORD says "Two become one..." Thank You for sharing & God Bless You!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Deborrah, thanks for coming by and for your thoughtful comments. It is a great bond and it really has helped me because I know that bond, that feeling is the same I should have for the Lord. God Bless and have a great Thanksgiving.

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      Coolmon2009 5 years ago from Texas, USA

      Beautiful poem and images, enjoyable reading

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Coolmon, thanks for taking the time to read this and for your comment. It is very much appreciated.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow, so steamy and sizzling - loved it. Just my type of poetry, thank you for completely brightening my day.

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      sofs 5 years ago

      Wow, this is poetry indeed!! Steamy poetry!! pushing all the buttons up on this.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Acaetnna, thanks for taking the time to read this poem. I am glad you enjoyed it. Hope you have a great day and best wishes.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Sofs, thanks for coming by and reading this poem. It was the first time I had written "intense" poetry. Thanks for the praise and see you soon. Take care.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      oooh, spicy!

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