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PRAYER OF LOVE

Updated on September 25, 2011


Walking into street,

Someone stopped me,

Don’t know if the,

Eyes were magnet,

Or was a beautiful,

Gift to me.


The moment neither,

Thinking was possible,

Nor understanding,

Stood with me,


But now overcoming,

My shyness,

I announce loudly…

It was the love with thee…..


Stopping again and again,

Became a habit to me,


And my eyes,

To those eyes,

Looked every moment,

No, fear to get wrong,

Isolated in me,


Yes a fear of time ,

Was always there,

Of loosing in me.


But now, overcoming,

All my situations,

I announce loudly….

Love was pondering there by thee…..


This habit intoxicated,

A craze in me,


And the sky was,

Shadowing a blanket,

Hiding this scene beneath,


To what extent,

Could I tell?

What was happening?

In my heart bell,


That, which is overcoming,

Today before you,

You can understand the LOVE for thee…..


A try to know what love is,

A desire to have,

That love bliss,


That made me to fall,

Till last limit,

Nothing is now left,

Here to loose at it.


But today when my,

Each vein is intoxicated,

With it,

And my every breathe,

Has been affected,

By it,


I now claim that,

The love for thee……

Was a prayer of love,

What I did.

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      ahorseback 5 years ago

      Oh Oh , someones in Loooovvveee! Watch out now,....:-}

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      hahaha...

      a horseback thanks

      these are some very old memories made new in form of poem today...hope u enjoyed..

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      Tanmoy Acharya 5 years ago

      I think magnets have 2 poles :)

      Lovely thoughts and a nice ending.

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      Ingenira 5 years ago

      Such a lovely poem. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Manoj Kumar Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      moneycop,

      Greetings from MAKUSR. You are a good poet the way you have gone through. A true devotee of Lord Krishna!

      Lots of Love,

      MAKUSR

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      TANMOY.......thanks...yeh..i havent thought of it..two poles..very fine thinking

      ingenira.........thanks a lot

      MAKUSR....thanks for comment and complement....trying to be his true one.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      It's so wonderful to be in love and to be loved. Nice poem.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      It's so wonderful to be in love and to be loved. Nice poem.

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Hi moneycop, wow a wonderful love...

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks vinaya

      thanks movie...

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      Sueswan 5 years ago

      "But today when my,

      Each vein is intoxicated,

      With it,

      And my every breathe,

      Has been affected,

      By it,"

      What a beautiful toxication love is.

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      William Benner 5 years ago from Savannah GA.

      Lovely...just as you are lovely!

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      Mamadrama 5 years ago from Upstate NY

      awwwwww.. to be in love!!

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      So good to be in love that you want to shout it from the roof tops. I was going to give you favourite verse but Sueswan beat me to it.

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      sueswan...when i was writing this poem...and used this word...u was there in mind....yes i knew these lines will be liked by u..

      thanks a lot...

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks high voltage....

      nice to have your comment here...welcome...

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks mama...yeh

      its very beautiful scene...when played

      its very beautyfull feeling, when laid,

      my hunger rose to that limit,

      that i woke or sleep now like a maid....

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      rose marry...thanks for that competing feeling....my verses have made a heart touching attempt..thanks...

      FOR U I HAVE ANOTHER VERSE...WROTE LAST NIGHT

      That vision when made me sink,

      I accepted to sink and started sinking,

      Surprised when the vision disappeared,

      I learnt the art of swimming

      Now swim continues in LOVE ocean,

      What's the fear of sinking now,

      As already sinkun

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very lovely. The love shines in your poetry. Thank you....

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      always exploring...........thanks to u tooo.........always welcome

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      breakfastpop 5 years ago

      Simply lovely!

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      breakfastpop...thanks

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      Love is Always Wonderful...whether it is Old or New...your Poem Moneycop, captures those Moments oh so well. I Love the Pictures you chose too.

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      "Quill Again" 5 years ago

      Love from te heart flows fro these words...

      Blessings and Hugs

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks...b milan..

      those momenets are really the ebst memorable ones..

      thanks quill

      .....what ever comes as a flow i write...not every idea i write. only that which is benifitial to others i write.

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      september girl 5 years ago

      Sounds like the 'love bug' has gone and bitten you. : ) Sweet poem!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Oh wow you knew I'd love this poem about love and I absolutely do. Awesome! Voting up and pressing all those buttons too!

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks...acaetnna.......keep pressing.....would be motivative to carry on..

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      moneycop, you have won my admiration, look forward to many more great poems from you.

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      and so u too...michel...thanks for comming by and reading my poems

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      You are very beautiful.!!!

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks michel

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      did you get my e mail? I want to wrie a poem for you

      where is Jabalpur?

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful! Plainly said ain't love grand???

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      thanks a lot rose...as ur name so u look also

      love itself is GOD no doubt that we have our lovers here and we love then diehearted ly but when we realizer the real love then only we turn towards GOD

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