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Pain Grows Well In This Soil - Prose

Updated on January 28, 2012

The rows were plowed once again
Sowing the seeds of bitterness
The tears dug deep this time
They forgot about tenderness
I let it happen
The fields awaited
A meadow
A mountain

Death
Heartache
It’s all the same
What is meant to be
Is meant to be
And what will die

And what will grow
Will soon depart
As always
And another tear
Will dig deeper than before
Because pain
Grows well in this soil

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    • Senoritaa profile image

      Senoritaa 5 years ago

      These lines bring out the true essence of the poem:

      A meadow

      A mountain

      Death

      Heartache

      It’s all the same

      Great job again.

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      P. Thorpe Christiansen 5 years ago from Pacific Northwest, USA

      Well done!

    • Deborah Brooks profile image

      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Wonderful...awesome poem...love the line...Because pain grows well in this soul....voted way up..debbie

    • pmccray profile image

      pmccray 5 years ago from Utah

      Simply awesome. Beautifully done, thank you for sharing.

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      The Suburban Poet 5 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @senoritaa - Thank you! I guess I was thinking we have different problems but we're still here and all share a common fate....

      @duffsmom - Thank you!

      @Deborah - Thank you again! I guess I thought of tears plowing a field over and over in each season of pain... why would it continue to plow if there wasn't fruit to bear?

      @pmccray - Thank you!

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      very nice, Mark. I like this!

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