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Pain Passes

Updated on June 26, 2010

Pain

Pain will crescendo and then it will pass,

It will rise and fall like the tide.

It is born small and becomes a giant mass

that makes you just want to hide.

It will gain on you till you can tolerate no more.

When everyone seems to judge you.

It makes you wonder what life is for,

Good moments for you are so few.

You heard it said, be careful for what you wish,

Words can be like a dagger.

The ocean floor rises up to meet me,

As toward the sea, I stagger.


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    • carolina muscle profile image

      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      What a heartrending post!!

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      Mary Krenz 7 years ago from Florida's Space Coast

      Thanks! It has been a rough couple months.

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      blackreign2012 7 years ago

      NIce hub Rated you up ~hugs~

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      Mary Krenz 7 years ago from Florida's Space Coast

      Thanks much!

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      James A Watkins 7 years ago from Chicago

      Sad but good. Thank you for sharing your creative talents.

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      Mary Krenz 7 years ago from Florida's Space Coast

      thanks for reading my poem

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      Sun-Girl 6 years ago from Nigeria

      Good article but it really touched my heart and made me sad a kind of but i really enjoyed reading it.

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      Mary Krenz 6 years ago from Florida's Space Coast

      Thank you, it helps me to put my feelings into words, thanks for reading my hubs.

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      Kenneth Avery 5 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      janiek13, GREAT hub. I rated the 'prescription drugs' hub great too, but this one, wow! Moves me. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

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