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Painted Canvas Above

Updated on September 16, 2013
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I looked for you in heaven ..through the galaxy of stars

Saturn and Neptune... Venus and Mars

I felt my feet...on the rocks below,

and felt your spirit...which had

a silky pinkish glow

The city lights shone, but could not ...match the sight

of the Lord's painted sky, on this bright starry night

Only your light.. Lord, could give me that glow,

that electric feeling...of you... in my soul

© 2013 cleaner3

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      jenbeach21 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Beautiful poem and art work.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Mary .. glad you read my poetry..!

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Just as the beauty of God can lead us to think and appreciate, this poem leads us to think and thank,

      " Only your light.. Lord, could give me that glow,

      that electric feeling...of you... in my soul"

      Voted up, useful, awesome, and beautiful. Shared as well.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks for reading my poetry ..teaches.. much appreciated.!

      Michael

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      I have often felt this way when looking at the heavens. It is such a rush and I can't quite put it all into words, but you have done it with this poem.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Rochelle ..!

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Keep praising His wonderful creation Michael. Beautifully written :) Keep being a blessing!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Kim.. love the stars ..they free my mind.!

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      It is as if you read my mind. How I love a starry sky --and especially with my fireflies which are starting to be fewer around every night. Beautifully done!

      Kim

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dotti .. glad to see you here .. finally .. love your work Dotti .. soulful and erotic many times..!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Eddy..

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      D.Juris Stetser 4 years ago from South Dakota

      Awesome and absolutely beautiful, Michael...You

      just keep on getting better and better don't you?!

      Hope all is well with you...hugs n'love dotti

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh so beautiful Michael you are indeed so talented and voted up for sure.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..lyricwriter!

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      Richard Ricky Hale 4 years ago from West Virginia

      Michael, voted up, awesome, beautiful, and shared on FB. Such a beautiful and meaningful poem representing your relationship with God. Powerful my friend:) Inspirational

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Moms secret.. your comments are appreciated

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you blossom...

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      Lissette 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Very beautiful work Michael. Full of light.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      The canvas of God's huge universe above and all around us takes our breath away. Beautiful poem.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Faith .. your praise is always looked forward to.!

      Michael

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, WOW, Michael,

      This is stunningly beautiful here, my goodness! Yes, He is the original artist of the starry nights.

      This poem here may just be my most favorite ever! Thank you for this glorious write on this glorious Sunday to glorify our Lord God.

      Up, awesome, beautiful, useful and interesting and sharing

      God bless you. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you ..WND.. have a beautiful weekend my friend and be safe .. give the gang a scratch behind the ears for me.. (I know they like that)

      Michael

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      And a most beautiful canvas it is.

      Splendid work, Michael.

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