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Painted Smile

Updated on December 27, 2017

Painted Smile

Please can I touch you,
I promise not to make you cry,
I just want to hold your hand,
Take a step with me.........light your smile,
wipe away your tears and we will try,

I saw you on a lonely corner,
face upturned toward the rain,
I saw the anguish in your eyes,
I felt the coldness of your painted smile,
I saw the river take your pain,

Then I took you in my arms,
sat you high upon a tree,
I made the stars fall like snow,
I knew that now without your tears,
you atlast you could fly free.

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    • HattieMattieMae profile image

      HattieMattieMae 6 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Lovely poem! :)

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      Vinaya Ghimire 6 years ago from Nepal

      sadness of your heart envelops me with sorrow.

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      Mark Hodges 6 years ago from Birmingham UK

      Partly correct although nobody actually died this poem was for the demise of a relationship that lingered in my thoughts long after thankyou for your interest Namaste

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      bonnebartron 6 years ago from never one place for too long

      Is this about someone who died?

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