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Sensual Paradise

Updated on April 16, 2012
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I am an artist, designer, photographer and writer. See more of my work on cmariearts.

Erotic sensuality

Devours me

Rising up slowly

From the unknown

Creeping lowly

Never to be

A stitch unsewn

Basked in sunlight

A tropical zen

The sensuality of it's curves

Wraps you in

The blaze of the fire sun

Sizzles the drum

That strums my soul

From beginning to end

My passion is awakened like

An animal that was caged

Running into the freedom of wilderness

Releasing it's rage

My paradise has opened up to me

Showing me it's beauty

Like a rose blossoming

Uncovering it's many folds

In this moment a quiet silence comes

That overtakes me

Where things from the unknown had

Spun to take hold


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    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      6 years ago

      Thank you Eiddwen :)

    • Eiddwen profile image


      6 years ago from Wales

      So beautiful and thank you for sharing.


    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      6 years ago

      Thank you Squeesh :)

    • Squeesh profile image


      7 years ago from United States

      Love this! thanks for sharing! :)

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      Thanks Cleaner you're too funny.

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      7 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline, could I use your new picture in a poetry hub?

      Please !!!!!

    • cleaner3 profile image


      7 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline, You sure don't need no advice from anyone!!!! to tell you how to write poetry.

      Please Frosty, you are not supposed to give advice to someone who writes like this. Next time, don't insult, just enjoy.

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      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Hi Epi thank you so much for reading and your kind words. Thanks for posting it too. You are awesome. Always good to see you!

      @ Senoritaa Thank you for stopping by!

      @ JaggedFrost Thanks for the advice and read. It wasn't about my arousal more how the paradise has a life of it's own. I was trying to describe it's own sensuality in a way.

      @ Schoolgirlforreal thank you for reading and your comment!

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      7 years ago

      The beautiful picture adds so much to the words, very nice!

    • Jaggedfrost profile image


      7 years ago

      i loved the imagery and emotion behind your words. A couple things. Using like isnt really needed. Try to write without it and see what you think. You don't need to work so hard foor rhyme if it doesnt quite work for you. i Loved the picture that went with it. It would have been nice to have more reference to what got you so aroused.

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      Rinita Sen 

      7 years ago

      Brilliant Caroline. Never knew sensuality like this before.

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      7 years ago

      .....I tried to make a comment here two hours ago and I'm not sure if it went through or not - so I leave one again by saying that your writing here is sensuous art in a poetic paradise and this time I'm sending it to where it belongs on a marquee posting on my Facebook page with a direct link back here - lake erie time ontario canada 9:44pm

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Hi Cleaner thank you for your little poem and for your compliments. I am glad you like my work.

      @ Misguided thank you for reading and commenting! Glad to see you.

      @ Thanks Always!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Caroline, I meant to comment on the picture..It is beautiful!!

    • MisguidedGhost16 profile image


      7 years ago from Queens, New York

      this is wonderful. sweet, passionate, almost as though your words are seductive. im excited to read the rest of your work.

    • cleaner3 profile image


      7 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      A thread on your blanket, What I wouldn't give to be

      to write such words as beautiful as these

      Soft, Tender,Words When you lay down on me

      Oh what a thrill, though it never will be

      just to look into your mind, read your words

      will have to be enough for me

    • cleaner3 profile image


      7 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      WOW, you strike deep into my imagination

      Powerful, only a woman can write like this.

      Please, don't stop!

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ LChristiane thank you! I am glad you liked it!

      @ Hi ShimmeringDawn thank you for reading and commenting. Always good to see you!

    • shimmering Dawn profile image


      7 years ago

      Beautiful.. passionate!!

    • LChristiane profile image


      7 years ago from Florida

      Great job, every word made me feel compelled to read more.

    • carolinemd21 profile imageAUTHOR

      Caroline Marie 

      7 years ago

      @ Mathira thank you for reading and your comments!

      @ JhonRude thank you for stopping by and reading. I'm glad you liked it. :)

      @ Cheryl thank you I'm glad you liked it. :)

      @ Sky thank you for your support and comments as always. :)

      @ Hi Debbie thank you for the great compliment! I enjoy your work too!

      @ Always thank you for stopping by. Always great to see you.

      @ Mckbirdks thank you for the compliment and for coming by. Always good to see you. Thanks for the catch!

      @ Ghaelach thank you for reading! Always good to see oyu!

      @ Hi Gypsy! I am glad you liked it!

      @ Silent hurricane I am glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by and reading!

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      Silent hurricane 

      7 years ago from Israel

      Beautifully amazing, breathtaking and just lovely. I felt as if I was there. Thank you for sharing.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      7 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Just wonderful. That picture made me feel like I was there.

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      7 years ago

      Beautiful poem Caroline.

      LOL Ghaelach

    • mckbirdbks profile image


      7 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Very nice provocative piece. The photo selection is amazing.

      There is a typo in the last line.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful, Paradise found...Enjoyed...

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      7 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Caroline...this is write the way I glad I am following you..I voted up and beatiful and awesome....blessing to you dear friend..debbie

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      7 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Always share that which you see and feel, it makes for the best gifts there are in and of everything . One needs to always speak that which he/she knows, knowledge is power. show me the one who refuses a share of such.

      Great work Caroline.

      Give thanks.

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      Cheryl Simonds 

      7 years ago from Connecticut

      Beautiful paradise, I felt I was there. :)

    • mathira profile image


      7 years ago from chennai

      Wonderful paradise, carolinemd21.


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