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Amanda's Little Horsey

Updated on October 22, 2017
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Sheila is a kids' picture book author who loves to share her moving children's stories with her readers!

Amanda loved horses and she would play with her horsey toys all day long. She had a special wooden rocking horse her dad brought her for her birthday last year, which she placed on a sunny windowsill in her bedroom. She rode her horsey every morning before going to school and right after dinner. She loved to swing back and forth and enjoyed the tantalizing thrill.

Her little brother would watch her play and wondered why Amanda didn't want to play with him. Perhaps, it's because he's a boy he thought. Or possibly my sister for some reason or another doesn't like me. And Larry felt lonely.

Amanda Ignored Her Brother

Every day Larry begged Amanda to play with him! However, she flat out refused. She ignored him and quickly shut the door of her bedroom. Amanda lived in a fantasy world in her quaint bedroom. Besides, her lovely rocking horse, she possessed a typewriter, a sewing machine, a record player and heaps of children's books along with a large pink desk her daddy had specially crafted for her. She also had a plethora of colorful costumes, which she kept neatly arranged on a large brass hook.

Whenever Amanda was out either grocery shopping with her dad or at the mall with her mom, Larry quietly sneaked into her beautiful playroom to read the lovely children's books neatly arranged on a superb shelf. And as he read he made believe he was riding a real horse and rocked her wooden horsey fiercely. Larry secretly desired to be an equestrian racer and to perform in a derby.

Amanda's lovely horse and Dad
Amanda's lovely horse and Dad | Source

Larry Hurt Amanda's Horsey

Larry accidentally broke the horsey's wooden leg as he violently rocked back and forth. He was surprised and afraid. What was he to do? He ran to get some glue and a bandage and he quickly mended the horse's leg. He hoped Amanda wouldn't notice and so he painted its leg to match the color of his mane.

Luckily, Amanda came home dressed as an adorable angel and she didn't notice her horsey's leg. She was trying on a new costume for a school play and was engulfed in having to memorize tedious lines of a monologue.

Amanda finally tried to impress her little brother.
Amanda finally tried to impress her little brother. | Source

Amanda Vowed Never to Play with Larry

That night right after dinner, Amanda sat on her favorite horse to gently ride it and its back leg snapped off. She couldn't believe it! She looked around and found a bandage. Hum, she thought this must be the work of my little brother.

“I'll fix him for good!” She cried out Larry's name and he came skipping into her bedroom, happy as a lark.

"You did this, didn't you?"

"Well, yes, how else could I capture your attention? You're always ignoring me, Amanda!

"I am never going to play with you, Larry!"

Papa Came Home with a Real Horse

Their Papa heard them bickering and decided to buy a real horse for Amanda. What else could he do? Her rocking horse was broken and she always received excellent grades in every class subject. Larry wasn't old enough for school yet. He was barely learning how to express himself.

And so, Amanda's dad surprised her with a beautiful horse the next day. He came home with it and placed a large red bow around its neck and hid it in the garage.

Wow, Dad Turned into a Horsey!

Amanda and Larry Rode the Horse Named Rider

Their mother believed this was a grand idea! She hoped her children would hastily make amends and learn how to take turns riding a real horse.

Amanda and Larry were terribly excited when they saw the horse and desired to ride it at once. Given, Amanda was the oldest she had the opportunity to ride it first. She put on her riding gear and blissfully hopped on the horse. She named him Rider because he looked like one! With her dad guiding her and Larry watching, she elegantly meandered along a cycle path in her neck of the woods.

Amanda Kicked the Horse and Larry Fell Off

When it was Larry's turn, he gallantly leaped on the horse and patted its back. He hoped to race down the street. His dad told him to take it easy and Amanda grew jealous. She blatantly kicked the horse in the rear and Larry fell off the horse and scraped his knee. He started to cry.

Their dad couldn't believe how mean-spirited Amanda was.

"Now, Amanda you go to your room this instance," Daddy hollered.

The most important thing is I was forgiven.
The most important thing is I was forgiven. | Source

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Amanda Was Not Allowed to Ride Rider for a Year

Later, Daddy had a long discussion with Amanda. She felt remorseful and her dad said she wouldn't be allowed to ride Rider for an entire year. This was her punishment for her terrible behavior.

Larry Won His First Derby

Larry enjoyed Rider every day when the weather permitted and he grew into a fine equestrian. He wasn't bothered by the fact that Pat didn't want to play with him because he had Rider. He loved Rider and spent heaps of time with him. Mommy discovered a derby in the heart of town and enrolled Larry to participate. Larry was a pro even at his young age and to everyone's surprise, he won his first horse race.

© 2014 Sheila Craan


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    Sheila Craan 2 years ago from Florida

    Yes, Amanda's Little Horsey is a fiction tale. Thanks for your complement. I am glad you enjoyed this story.

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    peachy 3 years ago from Home Sweet Home

    Awesome story, is it a fiction story?

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    Debra Allen 3 years ago from West By God

    Well after a month or two she would have forgotten what she did that would have caused her punishment and also the fact that she was growing up, physically and mentally the punishment would be added to the reason why she got it in the first place. Perhaps she could have had one of her costumes taken away. Each time that she lashed out then another costume would be taken away. That is where she was at in her growth and development. She used those as an escape and loved them so much. She would soon learn to be social and come out of her shell and be nice to others.

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    Sheila Craan 3 years ago from Florida

    Thank you, Lady Guinevere! What punishment do you feel Pat would have understood better? Perhaps, Pat's parents have missed the mark and were too stern.

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    Debra Allen 3 years ago from West By God

    A different kind. More like the kind that a child would understand. The punishment shout fit the crime. The story never says what her brother does that she doesn't like.

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    Perspycacious 3 years ago

    Instructive story.

    After having my photo taken on a photographer's pony as a young boy of kindergarten age, I knew I loved ponies and horses, the Lone Ranger and Silver. Finally, when in prepschool, I spent a summer teaching horseback riding, trail riding, and saved a young camper as his horse started to take a dust bath, saddle, boy, and all! Perhaps I was just being prepared to be there then.

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    Sheila Craan 3 years ago from Florida

    What more discipline would you suggest @Lady Guinevere? Pat being punished for an entire year was not enough in your book.

    Thank You, @Ghaelach and Lady Guinevere, your kindness is greatly appreciated!

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    Debra Allen 3 years ago from West By God

    I think Pat needed some special attention to understand why she did not like her little brother and a good amount of discipline for what she did to her brother.