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Peace Of Mind (Poem)

Updated on October 4, 2013
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Peace Of Mind

Can I find peace of mind?

I try to, but it's bind.


The depths with the water

It's almost as if I potted her.


It happens to every man

Even the spiritual of the land.


How can we start to command?

Instead of following false-orderly demands.

© 2013 PoeticPhilosophy

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Thank you Laurie :).

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      Rayne123 4 years ago

      Another vivid short poem.

      You tell a beautiful and vivid story with very little words

      Voted up

      Blessings

      Laurie

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Thanks a lot Eddy :)

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Truly beautiful PoeticP and here's to so many more.

      Enjoy your day .

      eddy.

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Thanks a lot Faith =D.

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Thanks James appreciate it :), can't wait to see another piece by you!

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      No, thank you Mhatter :)

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Very interesting indeed.

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Interesting and a thought provoking poem.Thanks so much for sharing!

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Interesting. Thank you for this.