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Perfect (poem)

Updated on August 20, 2014

Those perfect dreams

Those perfect themes

Those perfect lies on movie screens

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Perfect days

Perfect ways

Perfectly bidding till nothing remains

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Perfect solutions

To perfect confusions

Perfectly happen at others command

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We’re perfectly lost

We’re perfectly tossed

We’re perfectly drowning in tide pool we’re caught

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Perfect perfect

Missing respect

Tales to protect

Which might affect

Paths we select

Freedom’s effect

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Worst of all

How it affects how I love you

Freely and completely

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No one to reflect

No milestone to set

No limitations we might regret

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Just your perfect smile

To our perfect while

And maybe the rest will follow in style

Music only

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Perfectly beautiful! Up and more and sharing. Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Your poetry is pure perfection.

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      Ben Blackwell 3 years ago

      @ Vkwok

      You put it well.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Perfection is our aim, but how rarely we achieve it, and perhaps it's best that way. Love your poem.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      The perfect poem about what's perfect.

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      A great poem once again Martin.

      Eddy.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      A perfectly beautiful poem, great write.

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      Ryem 3 years ago from Maryland

      This is poem is perfect!

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      DJ Anderson 3 years ago

      For some reason, 'perfect' never stays perfect for very long.

      Wonder why?

      Nice poem for this Monday morning.

      Stay warm. It is only 72*, right now. Burrrrr! :-)

      DJ.

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Awesome!