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Perfect (poem)

Updated on August 20, 2014

Those perfect dreams

Those perfect themes

Those perfect lies on movie screens


Perfect days

Perfect ways

Perfectly bidding till nothing remains


Perfect solutions

To perfect confusions

Perfectly happen at others command


We’re perfectly lost

We’re perfectly tossed

We’re perfectly drowning in tide pool we’re caught


Perfect perfect

Missing respect

Tales to protect

Which might affect

Paths we select

Freedom’s effect


Worst of all

How it affects how I love you

Freely and completely


No one to reflect

No milestone to set

No limitations we might regret


Just your perfect smile

To our perfect while

And maybe the rest will follow in style

Music only


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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Perfectly beautiful! Up and more and sharing. Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Your poetry is pure perfection.

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      Ben Blackwell 4 years ago

      @ Vkwok

      You put it well.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Perfection is our aim, but how rarely we achieve it, and perhaps it's best that way. Love your poem.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      The perfect poem about what's perfect.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A great poem once again Martin.


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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      A perfectly beautiful poem, great write.

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      Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

      This is poem is perfect!

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      For some reason, 'perfect' never stays perfect for very long.

      Wonder why?

      Nice poem for this Monday morning.

      Stay warm. It is only 72*, right now. Burrrrr! :-)


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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida