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Perfect

Updated on June 11, 2017


When a baby cries for the first time,

Butterflies taking flight from flowers.

Two angel's sweet names to rhyme,

A new rainbow shines after showers


Grandmother gets pictures of her kids,

A new home is won, after all other bids.

That first puppy to greet its new family,

One brand new step by the baby to see.


Your child is baptized at the church,

A new baby bird on a limb to perch.

One candle lit on the birthday cake,

Feelings one gets as they graduate.


Excitement felt catching that big fish,

All compliments after preparing a dish.

The first scents of that brand new car,

Hitting a home run, watching it go far.




A flower still standing after a storm,

Watching a sunset's beauty to form.

Busy bees all humming, to fly about,

Winning teammates all give a shout.


Wayward son saved before he's gone,

Not having to bury him there all alone.

Watching kids grow up tall and strong,

Feeling you get knowing you do belong.




Watching the moon rise up in the sky,

Knowing the dawn comes, by and by.

Thanking God for your living in a song,

Having plans for your life, to be so long.


Just having breath and being alive today,

Escape death, able to survive, all do pray.

Enjoying each moment we have on earth,

Realize in God's eyes, we've great worth.




Everything is made perfect in our God's eyes...
Everything is made perfect in our God's eyes...

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    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      13 months ago from United States

      Thank you, Ryan, and hope you have a wonderful evening. Blessings. whonu

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      Ryan Fuller 

      13 months ago from Louisiana, USA

      A great work of beautiful poetry again. Love the image painted here about new life and the baby in the family. Liked this one a lot.

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      13 months ago from United States

      Thank you my friend and many blessings to you and family. whonu

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      13 months ago from Central Florida

      Very inspiration piece, with great flow, whonu. So many things to be thankful for!

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      14 months ago from United States

      Thank you much, my friend. Many blessings. whonu

    • Gypsy Rose Lee profile image

      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      14 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely and most inspirational.

    • Michael-Milec profile image

      Michael-Milec 

      14 months ago

      Filling heart and soul with peace and harmony, PERFECT.

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      14 months ago from United States

      Thank you so much my friend. Many blessings to all. whonu

    • Shyron E Shenko profile image

      Shyron E Shenko 

      14 months ago from Texas

      Beautiful poem whonu, filled with living

      And loving growing together

      Family.

      Blessings

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      14 months ago from United States

      Thank you for your encouraging reviews MsDora. Blessings. whonu

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      14 months ago from United States

      Thank you Tamara and blessings to you and yours. whonu

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      Dora Weithers 

      14 months ago from The Caribbean

      Your last two lines are the is like the ending of a perfect day. Thanks for feeding our souls with such enriching thoughts.

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      Tamara Moore 

      14 months ago

      This is such an endearing poem...so sweeet.

      Tamara

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      Eric Dierker 

      14 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Yes, yes and yes. The flow was good and the content great. This is definitely a favorite of yours for me. Thank you.

    • whonunuwho profile imageAUTHOR

      whonunuwho 

      14 months ago from United States

      Thank you threekeys and many blessings to you and yours. whonu

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      Threekeys 

      14 months ago from Australia

      This poem is coloured filled and gentle-beautiful whonu.

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