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Pictures in my Mind

Updated on April 2, 2013


The precious moments in our lives

pass so fast.. before our eyes

as they travel through... space and time


Like the Humming bird,

flitting... from flower to flower

it's palette ...

seeking only the sweetest nectar..

from each one


Sometimes... the best part of life

goes unnoticed, for we are lost in the pace

of the mundane... yet to come


To remember the first time

I touched your cheek

A certain softness... of a cool summer breeze

blowing through your hair


The biting chill...

of a winter snow

that sent shivers... through my body


These... float in my mind

like pictures

from a long lost movie

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Like the Humming bird,

      flitting... from flower to flower

      it's palette ...

      seeking only the sweetest nectar..

      from each one

      A beautiful poem along with great images ;but I especially liked the above words.

      A true talent for us all to enjoy and learn from.

      Voted up,across and shared.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Eddi.. to honor my work from a true poet as you is a treasure..

      Michael

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Really... a more beautiful description of memories...beautifully done Michael.

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      poetvix 4 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      Really beautifully done. The images go so well and the words just flow like water. Awesome!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @jackie .. thank you for the visit and the comments.

      @poetvix.. thank you missy, i wrote this early in the morning and the words did flow out of me... like they could not wait to get out. ..LOL

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Lovely poem about memories with beautiful pictures Michael. Hope you had a great day. Take care.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Love the memories in your mind and how you put them to page!!!

      Very beautiful, Michael

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      Hugs and love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Rochelle ,thank you for your support.

      @ Faith Reaper , my Southern spritual adviser.

      thank you for the visit and the comment .

      Bless you for your constant support.

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      You write so close to the point of all life Michael ! I like this style !......ed

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Ed.. I like your style too

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I thought you had done something more recently, but I don't see it on the profile. Oh well, this is beautiful work, Michael. I swear, it was only yesterday that I was in college and enjoying life to the fullest....and now look...I'm sixty-four and trying to teach others the same lesson that is in this poem...grab the day and enjoy the heck out of it, because time does indeed fly. :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Bill .. your comments always brighten my day . time waits for noone they say and we old fella's know it ..

      Michael

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