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Please, do not call me a sweet heart….A poem

Updated on January 30, 2015
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Please, do not call me a sweet heart ….

For I am no more left with a heart

A dead walking in the silhouetted street

Till the shadow is nothing more than

A nomenclature misread…!!!!

Please, do not call me a sweet heart ….

For I am no more sweet nothing

A bitter treaty between few smokescreens

Till the fire burns with the balanced tears

A caricature duly presented…!!!

Please, do not call me a sweet heart …

For I am no more where you think I am

A by gone era….giggled hopelessly

For I am a past living in future…

Present is misread unsolved equation…!!!

Heart is a street jammed with memories

And sweetness is dripping by…

Where tears are wanderlust identity…

Lost from the route so defined!!!!!!

Do not go by my smile…

A semblance so layered and so infinite….

Yet a horizon of endless sky in my eyes…reflect

Please do not call me a sweetheart …!!!!

For a change here,

Sweetness has made a heart stop beating!!!!

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Very good poetry here Dghbrh. I will not call you a sweetheart..but you are a good writer.

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Beautifully and powerfully expressed, precious heart. Oops, I hope that is okay. I am in awe of you talent.

      Up ++++ tweeting, pinning, G+ and sharing

      I hope you have a wonderful and peaceful day.

      (((Hugs)))

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      Patricia Scott 2 years ago from sunny Florida

      Many years ago my heart was snatched out of my chest when my marriage ended..so I was noone's sweetheart. But time had a way to mending it

      So powerfully written this piece that I felt that memory once again but only for a second as I was not lost in that place. Angels are on the way. ps

      Voted up and shared

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      mr-veg 2 years ago from Colorado United States

      Good One Poet !! Great job with words here, but sometimes future holds more than the past, so one can try to look forward for a change :)

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      Joanna Chandler 2 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hmm I agree with you because from your poetry we are kinda on the same note.....especially when you really don't mean it DON'T SAY IT!! . I hate playing with my heart, the despair , hurt and pain that goes on there. Only you personally will know what goes on in the inside. While the other party just walks away not caring about your emotions "so sad"... but life goes on and I have gone on only by God's GRACE!

      Thanks for sharing

      ~` Pleasant Good day to U `~

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      Smilealot 2 years ago

      Well written, very honest and open...but not sweet of course:-))

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      I feel that you are returning to your brilliant best. God speed!

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      ahorseback 2 years ago

      Okay so HE can't call you that but I hope that I still can ! LOL

      I love this , it's awesome !

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @Jodah....thank you for not calling me a sweetheart( ****smiles of course), and thank you again for liking this poem. Hope you are doing good. I am glad that you think, I am a good writer, actually I am trying to improve my works and it's a great inspiration from your side. Thank once again....many smiles your way

      deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dearest Faith......Thank you for making your time to visit here. Well...that is perfect you don worry at all. Anything from your end, will always be perfect...your continual support from across the world is very precious for me, I hope you know that. God bless you too always and I too hope that you are enjoying your day ahead.

      ((((( Hugs tooo))))))

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @pstraubie48....

      Uhhhh did I take you back to a time to remember which is not happy??? And did i make you sad??? If yes, I am very sorry....and yes I completely agree with you here.. time has really the best way to mend it. I never intended to make remember some things through my words here which cause pain but its nice to know that you did not get lost in that memory again. You are strong and I am sure that many smiles are waiting to welcome you in every new fold of your life ahead. Your votes and shares are also much appreciated here.

      Take care and thank you once again.

      Many smiles your way

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      hi mr-veg,

      Many thanks for making your time to leave your valuable comment here. I do agree with you, future may hold more than the past which we do not know today. One may sure try and look for a change provided that one is interested to. Anyway...hope keeps us going ...that is another truth of life. Hope you are good today.

      Take care and God bless you

      Thank you

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ LadyFiddler...

      Hello friend, How are you doing out there??

      The way you connected with my words, it is surprising and thank you for reaching me so well. Yes ...playing with heart, emotions, feelings and the raw pain inside ...the feel that the whole world is simply crashing down on you and breathing is a pain...these are very painful things. Well....I think both the parties concerned will always be hurt or affected but we do not know the views of the other party. The separate ways, if we need to take after some time then i do not understand why people get to be closer...God bless you and i hope the tomorrows bring much more happiness for you. You are strong and i am sure you are doing quite well for your life. So keep on moving ahead...and I know we will be good enough.

      Take care and many smiles your way

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Smilealot...thank you for being here and managing your time to leave your valuable comment...and I agree ...its not sweet at all :-)

      Take care and God bless you

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ manatita44....my responsibility is just to keep on writing....you my friends out there will sure judge my works...Thank you very much for being here...hope you are doing great my friend:-)

      Take care and God bless

      Om Shanti !!!!

      Deergha

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ ahorseback....ha ha ha...my friend, You are so absolutely rite here..yes you can anytime call as you wish to LOL.....thank you for being here and leaving your view about my work.

      Take care and hope you are doing great.

      Many smiles your way

      Deergha

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      ahorseback 2 years ago

      Thank you sweet heart !

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      You always ....Welcome ahorseback:-)

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      Joanna Chandler 2 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi Deergha thanks much for your warm reply and may the same be bestowed upon you. May God continue to give you strength and lead every road that you travel.

      The way to real growth is not to become more powerful or more famous, but to become more human and more tolerant. ~ Helen Steiner Rice (one of the best poets every)

      ~`~ Stay sweet and keep on keeping on~~`

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ LadyFiddler ....and i wish the same for you :-)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Very nice and right from the heart. Love the pictures.

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @Gypsy Rose Lee...for visiting here and making your time to comment. Hope you are doing great my friend.

      God bless you ...many hugs your way

      Deergha

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      Deb Hirt 2 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      That can definitely happen, if in the wrong place at the wrong time. Excellent work!

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you like always Deb, hope you are doing good.

      Take care and God bless you always.

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