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Plot Within a Plot

Updated on February 11, 2013

He says:I love you

His eyes say:I crave you

She says:I love you too

Her heart says:Liar,you won't get what you want.I can see it sparkling in your eyes.

He says:Will you stay till death do us part?

His mind says:Till my load unloaded in your cave.

She says:Yes,I will.

Her mind says:Dream on!..go away!

They depart on hope to meet next day.

He comes with a rotten plot,ready to invade and conquer,

But poor my heart!she doesn't show up today or next day.

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      Ghaelach 4 years ago

      Hi James.

      This is good.

      Must ask, how many times has that happened?

      have a good week.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks my friend for stopping by and commented.Umm do you mean the not showing-up or the conquering?

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Lol.. so you conquer? lol.. my dear James.. you are so special my friend.. love this poem.. ..

      many blessings

      sharing

      Debbie

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Never have I my dear but some day, some how ,somewhere I will lol

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      Ghaelach 4 years ago

      Where she doesn't show.

      Ghaelach

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Secret between daters lol

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      Sneha Sunny 4 years ago from India

      lol... This is so funny..... If guys are smart, gals are smarter! ;)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Yeah,very true lol girls think high and guys ..... :)

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      TDM 4 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      wow, very nice.

      I was very intrigued. great read.

      I. White

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Isaac White.Thanks for the visit.

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      TDM 4 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      Anytime,. ;)

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      Ha ha.... Lovely read. It actually happens in real life.

      I like the way you narrated it and I like the new flowers too on your photo. Have a beautiful weekend. :-)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I am glad it makes you laughing :)I am obsessed by flowers.I posted my real picture here but I coldnt stand looking at it hehe I found it so weird so I dragged it out ..You know I am sort of ugly Betty hehehe

      Have a nice weekend too.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      A great read James my brawd !!!

      Clever and has to be voted up and shared.

      Have a wonderful day .

      Eddy.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ Eiddwen,Thanks so much my chwaer for being a faithful follower:)

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      I found your poem interesting, showing both sides of the story. Good job! But what makes it kind of sad for me is, it is so true. Girls know when a guy wants to just use them. Some girls are just smart enough not to play his game. ; )

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @dreamseeker2 , We guys think alike.We have 1001 ways to lie, but girls have 1002 ways to figured it out hahaha .. Be careful who you trust, the devil was once an angel hahaha Thanks for the insight.

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