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Poem About Advice

Updated on June 30, 2012

"I wouldn't do that..."
Said my dad
I didn't listen
(Never had)

"I told you so" he
Later said
In hospital
Beside my bed



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      John Crowley 5 years ago from Sheffield

      I appreciate your comments, thanks :-)

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      alocsin 5 years ago from Orange County, CA

      Love the suprise twist at the end. Voting this Up and Funny.