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Long Distance Relationship Poem

Updated on November 17, 2017
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Ashish is a writer and poet who has hit the online market with success. He has pursued Creative Writing from London School of Journalism.

This poem is dedicated to all passionate lovers around the globe. This poem describes guy's feeling for his girl, who is staying miles away from him. He is missing her and expressing his real emotion from bottom of his heart. Even after staying apart he has not detached with his commitment.

He is sitting alone, feeling lonely in long distance relationship and waiting for the day when she will come.
He is sitting alone, feeling lonely in long distance relationship and waiting for the day when she will come. | Source
He is writing about his long distance relationship on papers through his golden words.
He is writing about his long distance relationship on papers through his golden words. | Source
She is waiting for her lover's smell, his touch, his hug and his love note.
She is waiting for her lover's smell, his touch, his hug and his love note. | Source

When you were here,

There was nothing to fear.

I could hold you so near,

There was no pain, no tear.


When we had a fight,

I could hold you so tight.

When nothing went right,

In the darkness, you were the light.


The long distance has played its role,

Each happiness has to pay its toll,

Everyone around is passing by scroll,

The road is smooth but filled with coal.


There are many things to share,

But the talk starts with a flare.

The Inner soul happiness is very rare,

Because I still miss your love, your care.


I am frustrated like hell,

I have no one to tell.

Trying to rise out of the well,

So it’s you on whom I always yell.


God is juggling our life,

We are struggling in life.

Against the rules of this life,

I promise I will make you my wife.

In Long Distance Relationship, He is promising her, ' I will make you my wife'.
In Long Distance Relationship, He is promising her, ' I will make you my wife'. | Source

A Poem About Long Distance Relationship By Ashish Dadgaa

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      Ashi 9 months ago

      @Lisa,

      Thank you so much for reading my work and your kind words of appreciation.

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      Lisa VanVorst 9 months ago from New Jersey

      A beautiful poem about two lovers who are trying to make this long distance relationship work. The words speak their inner turmoil. I really enjoyed reading this.

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      Sakina Nasir 14 months ago from Kuwait

      You are welcome! ☺

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      Ashi 14 months ago

      @Sakina,

      Thank you so much for your feedback :) I am glad that you like my words :)

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      Sakina Nasir 14 months ago from Kuwait

      Your poem touched my heart. ♥ Beautifully written and well expressed. I could feel the boy's emotions through the words. Great talent! Keep it up. God bless you. ☺

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      Ashi 15 months ago

      @ Vellur,

      Thank you so much for your feedback. I am glad that you loved my work and you can relate to my words. :)

      Blessings

      Regards,

      Ashish

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      Ashi 15 months ago

      @ Faith Reaper,

      Thank you so much Faith :) Yeah, indeed long distance is a challenge. It is very difficult to pass this phase in life.

      My pleasure :) but you deserve appreciation and applauds for your wonderful hub :)

      Awww that's really sweet of you to do that :) Thank you so much :)

      Wish you good health, wealth and success in life :)

      Regards,

      Ashish

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      Nithya Venkat 15 months ago from Dubai

      Beautiful poem, long distance relationships are heartbreaking, but true love will always hold those in love wherever they are.

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      Faith Reaper 15 months ago from southern USA

      Hello Ashish,

      Lovely poem of hope and renewal of that special love. Long distance love is a challenge.

      Thank you for you kind words to me on your forum about my hub winning on the niche site.

      I will share this poem.

      Blessings

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      Ashi 16 months ago

      @Manatita,

      Thank you so much for your comment and motivation. I can march on a long journey with your support and guidance.

      Thank you, Guruji.

      Hari Om!

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      manatita44 16 months ago from london

      Sweet poem of promise and also promising poem. Carry on, Bro. Carry on!

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      Ashi 16 months ago

      @ChitrangadaSharan

      Thank you so you ChitrangadaSharan for review my hub and giving comment from your personal experience :)

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      Chitrangada Sharan 16 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Beautifully expressed poem and I liked the rhyme as well.

      If there is deep love and mutual trust , the distance hardly matters. Speaking from personal experience!

      Enjoyed your hub , the pictures and the video. Thanks and keep up the good work!

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      Ashi 16 months ago

      @Jodah

      Thank you so much Jodah. Thanks for visiting my Hub and for your kind review.

      Oh wow, that's nice. I will definitely read your work. :)

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      John Hansen 16 months ago from Queensland Australia

      This is a beautiful poem, Ashish. I found your work through the hub Surabhi dedicated to you. I also wrote a poem about a long distance love affair "The Farthest Shore,"

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      Ashi 16 months ago

      @shprd74

      Thank you for your comment shprd74 :)

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      Hari Prasad S 16 months ago from Bangalore

      Nice rhythm ashish. Very heartfelt love poem you have unfolded. Excellent.

      - hari

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      Ashi 16 months ago

      @Venkatachari M

      Thank you Venkatachari M. :)

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      Venkatachari M 16 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      A very nice poem dedicated to lovers. It describes the deep pain and dedication to each other.

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      Ashi 16 months ago

      @Surabhi,

      Thank you so much for your feedback :)

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      Surabhi Kaura 16 months ago

      Interesting poem, Ashish. Rhymes gracefully as usual, bro. Your videos are wonderful. Enjoyed it! I would say that trust in each other keeps the flame alive. Om Shanti.