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Poem: FALLING.......

Updated on April 9, 2013
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Think slow,
Let me go,
What's in your heart,
Don't show!

True love,
Glowing above.
Blue sky,
Flying high.

Love true,
There with you?
Tell me you care
And follow through!

Cool flow,
Winds blow,
Don't reach out....
Let it go!

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Feelings and Doubts.......

Feel free,
Wonder and see.
For my soul,
You have the key!

You see,
It can't be
That I am for you,
And you are for me?

But, wait,
Don't hate!
To win your heart,
Am I late?

Don't go,
Let me show,
That I care, too!
You do know.... ?

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For Sure.....

Take on,
Breaking dawn,
Open doors,
Feelings born.

Hold on,
Fears gone,
Take my hand
And be strong!

Slip out,
No doubt
We are one,
Let them shout!

Slow down
Look around,
Touch my soul,
Hearts are bound!

Can't change your destiny!



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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey, Aubrey, great to see you..... Glad you enjoyed it! It's always a pleasure to see you :)

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      That was pretty awesome, La. Really cool piece of writing. It's always a pleasure to read a piece of yours! :)

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      I already know those eyes are not yours. LOL And it's okay though.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Faith! Soooo sorry I didn't see your comment..... Glad you left another one. Something is wrong with my notifications! Anyways, the pictures are overlapping. It's from a video, can't remember which one though. So, I would say not 100% self.... Those eyes are not mine, those hands are not mine, LOL....

      Thanks for stopping by again. Always love to see you!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, meant to ask if the first photo is 100 % "self" photo?

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Hi LaThing,

      I gave up on the tons of emails, and just came straight here to see what is your latest, and when I got to your profile page, I noticed this poem, as your photo is awesome. I wish I knew how to do that with an image. Hmmm, interesting. I see where I already commented, however many weeks ago, but I do not remember this imagery. I apologize, I must have been half asleep back then when I intially commented to be honest. LOL When reading the words as you have written them here, it just goes faster and faster, as if one is out of breath! Lovely dear one. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Awww, dear Epi, that is the sweet compliment.... I mean comment :))

      Always a pleasure to see you here, and returning warm wishes from my side of the world.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ...well .... FOR SURE ...I HAVE FEELING but NO DOUBTS that I am FALLING for your writing and your poetry ......and for you .......

      lake erie time ontario canada 12:20am and sending you warm wishes and good energy

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks for Loving it :)

      Appreciate your comment very much!

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Amazing poem, very beautiful, I love it. Emotionally romantic, brilliant!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Jan... Lovely to see you here! Yes, love is peculiar but it is an invaluable experience, and a part of life. Thanks for a wonderful comment... :)

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Lovely poem. Love is a peculiar thing to experience! Your words are exactly what it is all about.

      Jan

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thank you, dear friend, for the wonderful comment. Lovely to see you again :)

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      Mary 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

      I just love that you can feel the expressed emotion captured in your poems so amazingly LaThing...fears, love, hope & destiny = relationship & love...just beautiful...Up, awesome & beautiful...cheers

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Vellur..... Thanks for the lovely comment! See you around :)

      Thanks Gypsy Rose! Glad you stopped by, appreciate your comment!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely poetry. Enjoyed much.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Beautiful poem falling down, a feeling of being let down. Beautifully expressed. Voted up.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, dear Martie! Good to see you here. Yes, destiny is not in our hand..... Thanks for such a thoughtful comment! Appreciate your dropping in and for the vote :)

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      Martie Coetser 4 years ago from South Africa

      Lovely poem! Covering a lot of human fears and hopes. Scary: We cannot change our destiny. Whatever our decisions, right or wrong, at the end they seem to be what we were supposed to decided in order to reach our destiny. Voted up and thought-provoking.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Ruby! Glad you enjoyed it, it's always good to see you here. Thanks for stopping by!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      @LDCross, glad it inspired you. Thanks for the lovely comment, and good to see you.... :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very lovely your words of rhyme..Enjoyed reading..

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      Joseph De Cross 4 years ago

      Great piece of inspiration Lathing. The words fall perfectly. Love that smile and your heartfelt poetry. Have a great day/evening.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Aww, Cogerson, thank you for this wonderful comment..... And I will remember you too, :) 2013!!

      You are absolutely right, it can really hurt if you fall for someone and that someone doesn't care! You have summarized the poem quite well. It's alway good to see you here, thanks for stopping by!

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      Cogerson 4 years ago from Virginia

      Excellent poem....reading your poem takes me back to those days of falling in love....the excitement, the fear, the happiness, the uncertainty, the hope...it is like riding a roller coaster...because you want to make sure you are riding with somebody rather than by yourself. Nothing hurts more than falling in love with somebody that is not falling in love with you. Voted up and awesome. I will be remembering your poems the next time we vote for the 2013 Hubbies...as you are one of the best poets on HubPages.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Rosemay, lovely to see you, and thanks a bunch for your wonderful comment and votes :)

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      Rosemary Sadler 4 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Love this from start to finish. All those emotions that we go through so simply put in so few words. Extremely well done.

      Voting up and more

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL.... Thank you, dear MHatter, appreciate your encouragement :)

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Take a bow! Very romantic song of life. Thank you.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, Maria! I am a romantic fool, when it comes to writing..... In real life, 'Cold As Ice'... LOL

      Thanks for your lovely comment, Dear Friend! And for all the voted.... Hugs back at you :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      ROFL..... Rich, everything was fine until your last punch! What am I eating? Maybe it was that punch :))

      It's all from inspiration! Love your comment, great to have you in Hubpages! :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey Valleypoet, you captured the essence of this poem.......Appreciate your stopping by. Thanks!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Dear Debbie, it's great to see you, and thanks for the beautiful comment ......

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      @Kashmir56, appreciate your beautiful comment. Glad you could stop by.

      Hi, M Twins, lol, perfect description of emotions! Really appreciate your dropping in and for all the votes :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, BPop, good to see you..... Thanks for the lovely comment :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey Frank, thanks :) glad you stopped by......

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      You are a true romantic and your expressions are uplifting, hopeful and sweet.

      Voted UP and UABI. Hugs, Maria

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      LaThing -

      Girl, you're flying high in the face of love's journey, maneuvering around doubts, and clinging to the highest branches as you bask in the love's warmth. Whatcha been eating, anyway? lol I loved it! You expressed it so well, as I remember, that is. Wonderful job!

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      LaThing...the short lines capture the speed and frequency of the many doubts and feelings that grip us when we fall for someone, and when it is too early to be sure of the other's feelings for you. Very well written, voted awesome!!

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      beautiful touching love poem... I LOVE IT.. thank you for sharing this awesome poem.. blessings

      Debbie

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      Linda Rogers 4 years ago from Minnesota

      Yes~great job writing about the roller coaster of love. Up, Down, Up, Down...Never a dull moment. I hit many buttons on this Great poem.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      This is such a beautifully written and free flowing poem, which made it a wonderful read !

      Awesome !

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Joyce! Thanks for the encouragement .... Appreciate you support :)

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      I loved this from beginning to end. Up, beautiful and awesome.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Lathng this was simply amazing :)

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      A stunning beautiful poem.

      Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Laurinzo, good to see you! Thanks for the beautiful comment, appreciate it!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Wow, Billy, my friend..... You are becoming a poet! Lovely lines ;)

      Thanks for the wonderful comment, always appreciated here!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Cogerson! Glad you enjoyed it and remembered your past moments :)

      Appreciate your visit and all the votes.......

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      Live To Write 4 years ago from Phoenix, Az.

      Beautiful La Thing... absolutely beautiful!!!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Slow down, look around....let love happen at its own pace....savor it like a fine wine.....caress it like you would a piece of silk....love needs to be fully appreciated in all of its textures. Lovely poem my friend.

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      Cogerson 4 years ago from Virginia

      A fine addition to your HubPage collection. I enjoyed your poem...and I was able to go back to when I found and fell in love with my wife while reading this poem....keep up the great work....voted up and awesome.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Jen......I am glad you stopped by, too! It's always good to see you.... Thanks for your lovely comment and votes. Hope to see you back soon :)

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      Jennifer Stone 4 years ago from the Riverbank, England

      LaThing, this is lovely and you have described the emotions of falling in love perfectly! Glad I called in to visit you (I have very little time for internet stuff at the moment), voted up and stuff my friend, all the best, Jen.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Faith, lovely to see you this morning! Gad you liked it and appreciate your dropping by..... See you around!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Janine! You are absolutely right, the emotions that we go through.... And not knowing for sure if it's love or not! If it wasn't for my husband's persuasion, I would still be in doubt, LOL! thanks for your comment and everything..... You are a sweet heart :)

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Good Morning LaThing - This is beautiful poetry for sure! In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Janine Huldie 4 years ago from New York, New York

      LaThing, your poem on the emotions on falling in love was so beautiful and definitely spot on. Even though it was over 10 years that I ment and fell in love with my husband and I remember those feeling all too well and this poem brought back some great memories of our beginning. HAve voted up and shared here and socially too!!