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Poem - Forbidden Thrills

Updated on February 28, 2013
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Tears drop,
Heart stops!

See you there,
Life is unfair.

Walking stance,
Stolen glance.

Pass by me,
Don't you see?

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Your heart is shouting out to me!

Nervous looks,
Touch that shook.

People scorn,
Foreheads frown.

silhouette kiss,
Touching lips.

Little known,
Feelings shown.

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Hidden love, only for you!

Thoughts renew,
Dreams of two.

Become one,
Under the sun.

Holding hands,
Passing glance.

Time stood still
Ravaging chill.


Reawaken fallen trills!



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    • LaThing profile image
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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL, ..... And sometime we know exactly what you are thinking, even if you don't want us to know what's in your mind! :)

      Thanks for stopping by, and for this 'lovely' comment! See you around!

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      ahorseback 4 years ago

      Sometimes I find myself wondering , do others share my imagination , I guess I should be happy that you women can't read my mind !......:-} +++++++awesome +

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Drean On! Wonderful seeing you here...... Appreciate your comment and support! See you soon :)

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      DREAM ON 4 years ago

      So beautiful it is easy to drift away with your words.Thanx for sharing.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey, Aubrey, great to see you! I am thrilled you enjoyed it, lol

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      So romantic, La!! :) Absolutely beautiful. I'm glad I got to read this.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL, TT..... Glad I could bring some thrill in your life ;))

      Thanks for your wonderful comment and for stopping by!

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      Terrye Toombs 4 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      Ah, this takes me back to my wilder days when i cherished and sought out forbidden thrills; sneaking off to meet a forbidden love at lunch, sending a naughty text, etc. Thank you for the thrill of it all again. :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, Max! Glad you liked it...... See you around.

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Fascinating experience, the best ever =)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks James, for your encouraging comment! Glad you stopped by, and appreciate your votes :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL, that's the feeling.... Butterflies in the stomach!! Great to see you here, Nell, and thanks for the vote.... Hugs from here :)

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      You have a real creative way with your words LaThing. Loved this, voting up and rating awesome, and beautiful :)

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      Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

      This brings back memories! lol! really loved this, that butterfly in the stomach feeling, ooh! lol! voted up! cheers nell

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Sue, thanks for stopping by...... Appreciate your comment. See you around :)

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi LaThing

      "silhouette kiss,

      Touching lips."

      Love the imagery

      Voted up and away

      Take care :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Kashmir56! Thanks for stopping by, glad you liked it. Appreciate your sharing it :)

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi LaThing awesome poem, Forbidden Thrills a wonderful and exciting read who's words are descriptive and flow together well. Vote up and more !!! SHARING !

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      So good to see you, and I am glad you have that lake near you to cool off, LOL...... glad you liked it. It's always lovely to see you here.... Thanks Epi, you made my day! :)

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ....you just knew with a title like that - you would grab the epi-man's attention - and you certainly did - love the words which follow too -and this is the most exciting thing I've read all day - gotta jump into the lake now and cool off - sending you warm wishes from lake erie time ontario canada 3:23pm

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      I am thrilled (no pun intended, lol) that you like P&P too!! I read the book few times when I was young, and fell in love with it! Can you imagine how I felt when the movie came out??

      I feel so honored that you like my poems.... Thanks for the support. Hugs from here :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Gypsy Rose! Good to see you.... Thanks for the comment, it's thrilling :))

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      Mary 4 years ago from Cronulla NSW

      Oh my gosh LaThing is there a more beautiful love story than Elizabeth and Mr Darcy??? 'Pass by me don't you see' captures the essence of Darcy's heart perfectly!! Your poems captivate & excite me my friend and I have to be honest I open them first before I read other hubs...beautifully & succinctly expressed...all my votes & shared...

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. This poem is a thrill. Loved it. Passing this on.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Inspiration came from a movie...... Wrote what my hand wanted to write! Thank you for stopping by LDC, appreciate your comments, always.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      I thank you, MH, from the bottom of my heart :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Mark, goos point! Thanks for stopping by..... Love your comment!

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      Joseph De Cross 4 years ago

      Took myself by surprise. Got carried away by chance. Wonderfully done. Now is time to take a break before dawn. I wonder if you have survived expriences like this one..?

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Real good job on this. Congratulations and thank you

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      Mark G Weller 4 years ago from Lake Charles, LA.

      Powerful thoughts that can make desire into reality!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Ruby, good one, lol! Did Newton know much about forbidden thrills? Hmmm (JK, lol)

      Thanks for the comment :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Forbidden, It started with the apple on the tree. Beautiful poem.. Loved it..

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, Pop! glad you liked it :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Joyce, thanks for the comment and appreciate your visit!

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      I loved it and I voted that way!

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      I enjoyed you flow of your poem, great work.

      Vote up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Lol, I was just kidding :)

      You did vote for it so gathered you did like it..... Thanks :))

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      My pleasure......and yes sorry i forgot to say I liked it..very much, looking forward to reading more of your work:-))

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Valleypoet! I gather you liked it?! Always appreciate your dropping by :)

      Thanks for the votes......

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      Very heartfelt poem of a love affair played out in the imagination; thank you for sharing. Voted awesome!!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Patty! Good to see you again.... In our time, we have lost the thrill that comes from innocent things. Our society is too open now.... Has its advantages though! :)

      Thanks for the comment.....

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      lol, Richy, that's hermit the crab. It comes out from behind the mask..... Wait, must be the Phantom of the Opera... Discards its mask when the full moon comes out and goes back behind it afterward.... Hmmm, a werewolf?! Well, I am one of those :))

      Back to the poem; you actually got the right idea.... It is all about the love between the two castes, like the P&P..... inspired by the movie :)

      Thanks for stopping by....

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Definitely love the flow of this!!! And love the subtle hints of Forbidden Thrills, my favorite:

      "Nervous looks,

      Touch that shook."

      Well Done!!! Voted Up, Awesome, and Beautiful!!!

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      You've changed your profile picture! Daring, aren't we? lol

      Look, I've read the comments here and I'm not getting what many seem to be getting out of this. I'm seeing a love, possibly against the rules of social castes, that is desired, enjoyed, but still, not allowed to progress because of the rules. Instead of a physical thing, it's more of a mental "wish" for what could be, but impossible to complete. I like it, but may be at a disadvantage not having seen the 2005 version of P & P. Or, I may just be ignorant, as I've proven many times before, but am in a state of self denial about. Great poem and flow! As always and as expected!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      and do you know that Morocco was the first country to recognize publicly the independence of your country :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Aha!! You got it! Pride and Prejudice....... I thought it might not be your type of movie, but you guessed it :)

      This is another of my favorite .....

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      Cogerson 4 years ago from Virginia

      Pretty sure it is 2005's Pride and Prejudice....although it is pretty hard to be sure.....if not Pride and Prejudice....it has to be a Jane Austen novel turned into a movie. My second guess would be The Dark Knight Rises...lol. I like it.... poetry and movies...a good combination.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hahaha... Billy! Thanks for stopping by. Love your comment :)

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Naughty....Naughty....and oh, so thrilling! The taste of the forbidden fruit perhaps? Loved this....well done!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Lol @ Cogerson, for me it was harder to resist then, than it is now! :)

      Thanks for your comment and for stopping by.

      Hey Cogerson, can you guess what movie those images are from? :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Yes James, you guys are famous! :)

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      Cogerson 4 years ago from Virginia

      I liked this poem....it took me back to a time in my life when I was able to resist some forbidden thrills....but I am better now....lol. Voted up and very beautiful.

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      yes and Gladiator,Troy,Babel,the Mummy Returns,live from Bagdad,Kingdom of heaven,Ali Baba and forty thieves hehehe

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Morocco, the land of movies (Casablanca, lol), and sunshine!

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      LOL I wish to see it here too but unfortunately only what we get here just sun and rain and once in a blue moon hehe some snowflakes falling from sky like popcorns hehe

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks James! Love your comment.... Can't wait for the snow :)

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Beautiful,so smooth like sledging on snow and so sleek when you move from an image to an other,short and dense..I voted up !

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Faith! Good to see you this morning..... Yes, and it is better that we write about it then fall into it, LOL!

      I think I have caught the rhyming bug these last few days, can't stop.... LOL.

      Thanks for your thoughtful comment, love to see you here, always!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Hi LaThing - another thrill ride of a poem!!! A good way to get the juices flowing this morning. You are so gifted. It is that natural flesh thing inside us, that when something is forbidden, we desire it even more - it is just that built-in sinful nature in us as humans I guess. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      I am glad you liked the Forbidden Thrills, Frank! Love to see you around.. :)

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Lathing I love the streaming of your words.. the downflow effect.. and well actually there's nothing I didn't like in forbidden thrills up and awesome

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Jan, it's good to see you here! Inspired by My favorite book, P and P! :)

      Love you for sharing :))

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      Janine Huldie 4 years ago from New York, New York

      LaThing, beautiful poem about the forbidden. As much as it is forbidden, it is the one thing we can't help but want and you definitely conveyed that here with your words. Very nice job. Have voted and shared too!!