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Poem - I See Your Dreams......

Updated on April 6, 2013

I don't know why, I don't know when,
I lost myself in your words again!

Selfless smiles, shadows so fine,
Silky red roses, droplets of wine.

Eternal touch, means so much,
Every little dream, romancing such.

Endless sensation, mornings and nights.
Ever so soft, senseless sights.

I SEE ....

You and I, feeling so high,
Year of love, teasing us by....

One's love in hue, me and you
Ocean's warmth, embracing us anew.

Under the moon, happening so soon
Unsure feelings, hearts are in tune.

Rushing through the crowd, search is over due,
Running in the wild looking for your clues.

YOUR .....

Diving in the depth of a heart's burning passion,
Dying at the touch of a mortal obsession.....

Running away from the privileged ways,
Rushing to be there, where the lovers lay!

Erecting every possible mirage of a wall,
Ensuing no one would recognize the call.

Amused by the light that flows through the sea
Agonizing in a shadow, where we need to be!

Many a time glances are met
Moments of truth, hearts are at test.

Sweet lonely whispers, carrying me above
Slowly leaving traces of unconditional love.....

I SEE YOUR DREAMS........

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      Nancy 4 years ago from California

      Give this poem a thumbs up. It was unique and beautiful.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Ladyhawke! Really appreciate your stopping by and commenting :)

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Slowly leaving traces of unconditional love....this is beautiful! I could say the same thing in ten different ways, but bottom line this poem is moving and exquisite and just simply beautiful.

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      Rob Welsh 4 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

      I know this dream, on my birthday was a solar eclipse, occurring within the year of the dragon... and showing me what wonderful dream patterns can flow before one's eyes, if one stares at the beauty of the sun's eclipsed fire, after the scorched moon moves on... no sleep was required to know such a dream!

      Of course, I'm now totally blind and tend to wobble badly now.... but it was a lovely dream, that left me intuitively knowing that.... you know.... the sun's very bright! Like your poem, though your poem, soothes instead of burning, like when the embers of a campfire glow, to provide warm light rather than intense heat... Excellent imagery Liz... Thank you for sharing your talent and dream... PD

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      Field-Of-Flowers 4 years ago from Midwest, USA

      I like how you spelled out the title within the poem. Very beautifully written and thank you for sharing this with us. :) Have a great day!

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      What would you like me to comment on? your cleverness... your mastery... the style... the expression of an idea. All exceptional. Thank you.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey, Billy! Great to see you here. And I am sure you will be able to write a beautiful hub about unconditional love, :)

      I am pleased that you liked this poem, and thank you for the wonderful comment, my friend..... See you around!

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Lizzy - Double acrostic? What a challenge! Not only did you succeed, you did so with style, class and emotion! Ah, the heart swoons and the brain can think of nothing but love. I think I might remember something like that. I had a dog once..... Great Job!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      November 13th, Solor Eclipse over the Southern Hampshire...... Happy B.day, PD. hope you had a wonderful time. Too bad it wasn't Friday! LOL, JUST KIDDING.....

      I am really appreciative of the fact that you stopped by and read my poem even though you are blinded by the eclipse *_*

      Seriously though, I thank you for the kind words. Very touching :)

      Take care, and don't stare at the sun too much

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hello, Field of Flowers, welcome to my corner! glad you enjoy my little poem. Thank you for the wonderful comment. See you soon :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Aawww, that's so sweet, MH! Thanks for such an awesome comment..... Your visits are always welcomed :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey, Richy! Yeah, double acrostic...... It gives you the feeling of an echo in the back, like, I I I I ....... LOL

      Glad you liked it and I understand...... you can dream about dogs..... No problem! (jeez)!!!! :)

      Thanks for stopping by!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      what an amazing poem it's like floating on a cloud type of read Lathing.. one word.. Perfect!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      So so clever I loved it and vote up plus share. You are very talented and here's to many more to come.

      Eddy.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey Frank, great to see you! Thanks for the read, and I am glad you got the floaty feeling out of this :)

      Always lovely to see you!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Dear sweet friend, Eddy, thanks for your support, and hope to see you soon :)

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A very creative use of the acrostic. That was very clever and I enjoyed it immensely.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Blossom! Thanks for your encouraging comment, really good to see you :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Lovely, lovely words...

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Ruby, glad you could stop by. Thanks for the comment, rappreciate it :)

      See you around!

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      Richard Craig 4 years ago from West Midlands, England

      What can I say that hasn't been said already? This is a beautiful poem, executed with a clever format and passionate words. If I had a hat I'd surely take it off to you. Instead I'll write this comment, vote up and 'beautiful' :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Why, thank you sir, for such an encouraging comment! You are too kind :)

      Appreciate your stopping by, Richard......

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      kylesanderson 4 years ago

      Oh my word! This is my favorite poem I've read on HP since I joined! Thanks!

      Edit: I honestly just love this. You have a wonderful gift of art with words.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Kyle, that's so sweet of you! I am glad you liked it. We have some wonderful poets here in HP, much better than me, lol....... Here are few names, you might want to look them up, Epigramman, Vincent Moore, Poetic Fool, Pearldiver, Dabrah Brooks, Frank Atanacio, Eiddwen, Gypsy Rose and many, many more!!

      Anyway, I do appreciate your stopping by and for your very lovely comment :)

      See you around!

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      The love is overflowing here in this lovely poem of yours LaThing, and the poetic stanzas are on point as well. Wonderful job!

      I like to read good poetry, and I have to say that your style and flow of writing it appeals to my inner senses for sure, and open up doorways of joy, happiness, affection, and memories that may have been laying dormant of emotions that haven't been expressed by me for quite some time.

      Thanks for writing this way, and for being a great author of poetry, keep up the spectacular job that your doing with it all.

      Thumbs up and out!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      I am honored, Mike, that my poem touched you! Thank YOU for reading my poems, and for appreciating them! Always good to see you here :)

      Take care, friend!

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ...your writing is a dream - it just flows and flows so beautifully like the author behind these special words - sending you warm wishes and good energy on this sunday morning at lake erie time 10:10am

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      My dear Epi, that is a wonderful comment. I feel humbled! Really appreciate you presence, not only in my hubs, but in the entire Hubpages!

      Wishing you well in this cold day, keep warm, my friend! :)

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Beautiful and tender expressions of love...Lizzie, you are a dreamy poet.

      Voted UP and ABI. Hugs, Maria

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL, Mar, you discribed me to a tee!! Glad to see you here, and thanks for all the votes. See you around, dear friend..... Hugs back at ya!

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Love that dream state of love. Your poetry is amazing! Really beautiful write.

      Voted up, awesome, beautiful and interesting

      God bless. In His Love, Faith Reaper Happy

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      Bill Blackburn 4 years ago from Twentynine Palms, California

      WOW... Sometimes words aren't enough! You lady, are very talented and it's my pleasure to "follow" you!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Faith! Great to see you again..... Appreciate your stopping in! Thanks for all the votes, see you around!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Bill...... Thanks for such a nice compliment! Really appreciate it. It's a pleasure to be following you too, and looking forward to reading your hubs :)

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Wow! That's all I can say...... wow!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Shauna! Thank you...... That comment, coming from you, means a lot! :)

      Have a great night.......

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      Murphy 4 years ago from Chicagoland, Illinois

      Another one... I need to pay attention!... Keep it up!... I enjoy these! *smiles* & Pinned.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Jeff! Good to see you..... Thanks for stopping by and for sharing :)

      Appreciate it!

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      Exquisite and simply romantic. You have the talent for creativeness with your unique style. I see you are a dreamer to? nicely done my fellow poet. Beautifully expressed, now I just want to go to bed and dream:-) Voted up and shared.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Sir Vincent, it's an honor to have you visit my corner! Yes, I am a dreamer, but in real life (lol) I am a very 'down to earth' type of a girl! I love to put my dreams in a paper though :)

      Have a great night, and beautiful dreams! Always appreciate your support.....

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      David Walston 4 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Indeed the above comments are more than correct, Fine Piece!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thank you for the cool comment, and really appreciate your visit! Take care.....

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      Wakana 2 years ago

      Super jazzed about getting that knwo-how.

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      Wita 2 years ago

      That kind of thikning shows you're on top of your game

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