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Poem: In Love With The Mysterious Sea

Updated on April 7, 2013
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From the Abyss of the sea, comes the voices with a plea.
From the waves of emotions, see the depth of the ocean.

Life simply passing by, is not what it tends to be
With his words of tenderness, feel the soul at its rest.

But The soul of the one, who imprisons hearts for mere fun,
Fails to submit to affection, fondness or compassion.

Losing yourself to the sound, of the waves falling down,
shadows of the past, holding on, fading fast!

Utter words that are scorned, in a sweetness of a glance,
Taking another chance, tangled up in a romance.

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Feelings And Emotions.....

Fury of the maiden, no brave warrior can stand
With the Eyes of passion, touches of a hand!

Sudden death of the feelings, emotions running high,
Beneath the blue sea, and the rising of the sky.

Hear the voices from within, holding on, fading thin,
Cannot let go of the memories that has never been.

Wonder at the mysteries of its depth and shallow folds,
Never will we know all the stories that it holds!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I can read a poem about the sea without thinking of a song by Dan Fogelberg called "The Reach." That song is as beautiful as this poem. Listen to it if you get a chance; I think it was written about the coast of Maine. :)

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      Sommer Dalton 4 years ago

      Well done! Mysterious and beautiful, voted up and more!

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      Jools99 4 years ago from North-East UK

      Wonderful poem and wonderful photos which really bring it to life. That ship being tossed around on those huge breakers - I live by the ocean and it is as mysterious to me now as it was when I was a small child. My father used to tell me stories of shipwrecks on our coast and I would sit rapt - then I'd be paddling in it in the summer and wonder if this was the same ocean he had told me about.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Billy! I was just reading you hub, 'Power of Love.....'! Beautiful hub! I will check out the song of Fogelberg...... Coast of Maine, love the view! But the water was always cold! Brrr

      Appreciate your visit, always :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Sommer! Thanks for stopping by. Glad you found the poem to your liking :)

      Appreciate your votes. See you around!

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      today the best poem so far.. so much fantasy and mystery of the sea.. only you can pull it off.. and you did Im in awe bless you

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Jools! Thanks for the beautiful comment...... I also grew up near the coast, and have always been fascinated by it! Its mood change is just phenomenal, and its depth is overwhelming! Thanks for sharing your experience. :)

      See you around......

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Frank, Buddy!! That is so sweet of you!! Thank you from the bottom of my heart :)

      I am speechless!

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      Maria Jordan 4 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Lizzy,

      Your connection with the sea is strong, compelling and beautiful.

      I love the pictures you have chosen to accompany these treasures.

      Voted UP and ABI. Hugs, Maria

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      This is completely awesome. I am so pleased that I stopped by.

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      MizBejabbers 4 years ago

      I know that poetry is subject to interpretation, and not growing up near the ocean, I equated it to relationships. I think you have a good description of some types of relationships, shallow, fleeting, or much depth and breadth. Lovely, and so are your photos. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Lizzie, you captured the mystery of the sea and the wonders it holds below. Very nice!

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      beautiful poems! The pictures were a perfect match! Rolling waters, like your words! Thank you for a great hub! Up and awesome!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Dear Mar, great to see you here! Got to love that see, it covers most of our world! :)

      It's always lovely to see you here. Thanks for the votes.......Hope things are going well. Hugs back at ya!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Acaetnna! I am glad that you stopped by too! Great to see you here, and thanks for the comment. See you around.......

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      You are absolutely right, Miz! That's the beauty of any poem, they can have more than one interpretation. And I can also see that meaning in here, Relationship! Well done, MizB :)

      Always a pleasure to see you here..... Thanks for all the votes. Hugs.....

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Shauna! Wonderful to see you here! Thanks for the comment, appreciate it :)

      Hugs, dear friend!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Btrbell! Thanks for stopping by........ Like your comment, 'rolling water, like your words!' :)

      Appreciate your votes. See you around.....

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      There is something strangely compelling about this poem. Thank you for creating it.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      I am glad you find it strange (??), MH! LOL ...... ALWAYS HAPPY TO SEE YOU HERE! :)

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      This is wonderful Lathing! The words flow just like your sea, so beautifully. Voted up,

      Jan

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      I love the deep blue sea and you have captured every bit so well. Voted up.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Jan, for the wonderful words! I am glad you liked it :)

      Thanks for stopping by!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Vellur! Thanks for the comment, and your support! Always happy to see you :)

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      Thanks for sharing this awesome and interesting poem, loved the pictures to !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Kashmir! Hope all is well, haven't seen you for a while. Thanks for the encouraging comment, and the votes. See you around......

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      Wow, this piece is stunning. I felt the power of the sea, it's waves and tides engulfing everything in it's path. It's fury and calmness to. The depths not fully measured lays a mystery to many. What swims in the sea is a source of life for many, but we must treat her justly or be swallowed by her revenge. Captured fully captures her wrath, nobody can escape it when she lets it spin. Bravo, well done my poet, voted UP and shared.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hello, Sir Vincent, it is wonderful to see you here! Your comment is a wonderful summary for this poem. I am grateful for your support, and your continuous encouragement. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!

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      Rich 4 years ago from Kentucky

      Lizzy - Again, I'm late to the party. I was caught by the lady of the sea. She wanted to know about Charlie the Tuna, and I had to fill her in. I fear Charlie's going to have a harsh mistress after the things I relayed to her, but he has such a canned sense of humor, he deserves it. As I crossed the ocean many times, I was amazed at both its beauty and its ferocity. What can be beautiful can indeed be deadly. I had a snake like that once, but that's another story. Great poem!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      ROFL..... Ok, now you are making me roll on the floor, reading your COMMENTS!! Good story, hope you get to write about your experience with the 'Lady of the Sea', (whatever that is!!)! :)

      It's always good to see you, Richy, even if you are late...... Don't worry, I am always here :))

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      This poem has swept me away like a wave into your sea of emotions here, and my mind feels all wet now LOL, nicely done LaThing.

      You got that thing with words to make them come to life onto the page here, as I felt by reading your poem as if I was there, then the twist towards the end as well as the grand finale was excellent!

      Bravo! on doing such a wonderful write up with this ocean deep poem, thumbs up and you know the rest.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL, Mike, hope you got dried :)

      Thanks for the wonderful comment. Your comments are always uplifting, and I am glad you stopped by! See you around....

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      Jennifer Stone 4 years ago from the Riverbank, England

      I love the sea, and you have captured the mystery and power of the ocean beautifully with your words... voted up and all sorts my friend, all the best, Jen

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Glad to know that you love the sea, then you must have connected to my poem :)

      Always lovely to see you, Jen, my friend from across the mysterious Sea! Hugs from here, take care!

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      The power of the sea always manages to evoke emotions, and you have done that brilliantly in this piece. Thanks for sharing:-))

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey there, Valleypoet, Good to see you again! You are absolutely right, that sea pulls at the heart, doesn't it? :)

      Appreciate your support, always!

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      amazing, your poetry is flowing like a river.........

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thank you, Girishpuri, for the comment, and for reading my poem. Greatly appreciate it!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Such a lovely poem flowing like the waves of the sea. Love the sea and this has great imagery. Could almost hear the sound of the waves. Passing this on.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, dear friend, for this awesome comment! I am glad you could relate to it...... Appreciate your support :)

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ...well you took me there and your words are as beautiful and evocative as the ocean is deep - and your poetic talent is like a bottom cup of coffee - just keep filling it up 'cos I don't want to stop this high.

      Love the imagery here and yes the mystery of it all - hubbravo from lake erie time ontario canada 3:49pm

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Dear Epi, what a wonderful comment to wake up to! :)

      Thanks for all your support, and hugs to you dear friend!

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      Peggy Woods 4 years ago from Houston, Texas

      The sea can be soothing to the soul and also frightening when it is stirred up. Your words were compelling and evocative. Nice job! Sharing.

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Peggy, so true.... Soothing, yet can be extremely frightening when it is at its angriest! Thanks for stopping in, and for the wonderful comment. Appreciate you support! :)

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      Olde Cashmere 4 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Your poetry is beautiful LaThing. I really enjoyed this and am voting up. Also rated beautiful and awesome :)

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, James! It great to see you here..... Thanks for your support, and your comment. Take care....

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      Gustave Kilthau 4 years ago from USA

      LaThing - Looked over here to see if it offered a hint to me as to what "ko'wI" meant. No help with that one, but the poem was really great. Wish I could write that well.

      Gus :-)))

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL@Gus! Well a Ko'wl would be my way of saying Cool, or Kw'ol!! That which you are :)

      I am glad you stopped by and I believe you are a better writer than me! Thanks for the comment and always good to see you here :))

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      manatita44 20 months ago from london

      Extremely beautiful poem. Continue ...

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