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Poem - Jiminy Cricket, Little Nymph, And YOU!

Updated on October 2, 2012

Your Conscience!

If your Jiminy cricket, let's call him J,
pretends to be your Guardian Angel
Then Pinocchio hasn't seen his little Tinkerbell!
(Stories are messed up, but who cares to tell!)

When J warns you and says, 'I told you so!'.
Think about your little Nymph, Tinkerbell, she really knows,
Whats in your heart and what you desire...
J has no clue what sets your heart on fire!

If J really thinks, for you, he'll always be there,
that little Nymph will whisper in your ear,
Sweet little things that J doesn't know....
You will hold it in your heart and won't let it show!

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When you are kind of lost, and everything is dark,
She lights up your life with the right spark.
But J can't stand it seeing you in the wrong light,
He will soon see to it and smash it with all his might!!

When J tells you to drop it all and let it go,
She will whisper in your ears to go little slow!
You may agree with J and feel you need to be free,
But Your heart will bring you back to your little Nymph's tree.

The tree that holds you and hugs you, but it's not there,
Feelings and emotions, and the soul that you share
With that little Nymph that you can not see,
Follows you around since she came to be.

Little Nymph will wait for you.........

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Maybe, she is naive, like a little child,
But she keeps you on your toes, and sometimes she is wild!
J thinks she is annoying and says, 'you don't really care!'.
But you always miss her when she is not near.....

Now, J is really mad, and tells you to see,
'That little Nymph is making you miserable! let her go, let it be!
Why don't you open your eyes and clearly see;
Surely, she has come between you and me.'

She will then leave you as quietly as she came,
But your heart will tell you otherwise,
and things will not be the same!

You see, you will miss her,
Like she misses you.....
You were to be one, and not two!

Always There For You.........

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      Jayce 2 years ago

      I aptceriape you taking to time to contribute That's very helpful.

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      Kristabelle 2 years ago

      Was totally stuck until I read this, now back up and rungnin.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey there, Dreamseeker, good to see you in my corner! Thanks for the comment and the votes, appreciate it! :)

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      dreamseeker2 5 years ago

      Very sweet and very imaginitive. Had to vote it up and awesome! : )

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, dear Eddy! You are a wonderful friend :) Glad you liked it, it's always good to see you.....

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      Eiddwen 5 years ago from Wales

      A great hub and I share onto my FB page as well as vote up.

      Eddy.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL@Cogerson, the only problem is that in this you can't tell who is the devil and who is the angel! :) just because someone has wings doesn't necessarily means that she is an angel, right? :))

      Thank you for the wonderful comment, and all your votes.... See you around!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Vellur! Sorry, I didn't see your comment.... Thanks for leaving such a nice comment :) really appreciate it. See you around!

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      Cogerson 5 years ago from Virginia

      I enjoyed reading the about the fight for power between J and nymph .....very well written and very creative...truly impressive....I was pictured the famous scence in Animal House were the guy has the devil on one shoulder and a angel on the other shoulder...both giving out advice in conflicting answers....well done...voted up and awesome.

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Beautifully expressed, great poem from the heart. Voted up.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Mary, love your new outfit, simply Gorgeous!! LOLZ.

      Thanks for the profound comment. Yes, how many time we go through playing games with our conscience! Life is a wonder.....

      It's always lovely to see you, appreciate your dropping by :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, dear friend, the little Spy, lol! Good to see you here and thanks a bunch for sharing..... Hugs!

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      Mary Craig 5 years ago from New York

      I certainly see what you mean about the stories being 'messed up' but it is also easy to see the message here. "your heart will tell you otherwise,

      and things will not be the same"...how many times does that happen in our lifetime? More than I care to count...beautifully done.

      Voted up and interesting.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hi lathing! thanks for sharing, you are really write wonderful poems :) hugs

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hello, MamaKim! :) great to see you here.... Glad you enjoyed it, and really appreciate your comment and the votes!

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      Sasha Kim 5 years ago

      Wonderful poem LaThing! I'm a big Disney fan so any poem with a character is great in my book... but then you added such wonderful meaning and the flow ... well, just wonderful ^_^ Thank you! Voting a bunch!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Suzette! Good to see you..... Thanks for such a sweet comment, and I am glad you enjoyed it :)

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      Suzette Walker 5 years ago from Taos, NM

      What a charming poem. I love the whimsical feel of it. Very beautiful images and so light and airy like a fairy. Love it!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL, Mr. C, is that 'Peter Pan' in you coming out?! :) Your comments are always so encouraging, and uplifting. Thanks for making my day! Best wishing from this side of the continent :)

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ....I must say .... your title certainly caught my eye - a title that I would die for and to say I had written it - lol - and you have now successfully exploited the child in me as well - easy to do when I read something as wonderful, charming and beautiful as this - in fact I don't want to grow up now! lol sending you warm wishes from the break of day at lake erie time ontario canada 7:43am

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Gypsy Rose! Glad you came by and visited with J and Tink..... Always a pleasure to see you here! :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey, MH! Glad you liked it...... Oh, and I will NEVER step on those cute little creatures!! :))

      Thanks for stopping by.....

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Lol, dear Faith, that's a great summery of the poem! The beauty of a poem is that each reader gets something different out of it...... And I prefer to leave my own reasons of inspiration out of it, so everyone can have their own interpretation! I love the way you looked at it...... And Frank, he is just being Frank, lol, ..... A true friend :))

      Thanks for the thought provoking comment, see you around!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up. Delightful and interesting. Enjoyed this and the visit with J and Tink.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Maria! Great To see you here...... Thanks for the wonderful comment. Life can be a Fairytale with hidden messages :), right? Appreciate your votes, hugs from here !

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey Ruby, thanks for stopping by and the beautiful comment :)

      Hi, Jan! Thanks for stopping by all the way from accross the Sea :) Glad you liked it..... See you around!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi ther, Kashmir! Thanks for your generous comment and the votes :)

      Have a good one!

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Very imaginative and thank you for not "stepping on" one of the hatter's favorite characters.

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      When I first saw Jiminy cricket, I thought you were going to write one as Gypsy writes with the Walt Disney themes; however, as you state in your owns words, "Stories are messed up," and I agree, the stories are messed up, but who cares . . . LOL, Frank would go there . . . I believe she is writing about "an especially beautiful girl," is the actual definition of Nymph. Frank knows that, he's just being Frank. Anyway, okay, here's my take on this one, but I could be way off base as you're the writer ---okay, "J" to me represents ego and pride, as this "you" needs to "show" and maybe not shutdown and wipe out all most likely because "an especially beautiful girl" pointed out something to "you," so then "J" ---pride flared back up all over "you" and then "you" didn't know what to do, and hence the good smash - boo boo, and "you" needs to be free . . . not really, as "you," surely already has another "beauty," which the "especially beautiful" one most likely has figured out. Well, that's it, my take. Ha. LaThing, I really love the ending, as it is just perfect . . . just listen to your heart, and then maybe "you" can have a new beginning. The ending is the best part of the story. You'll have to do a part two, if "you" evers puts pride and ego, I mean, "J" in his place. Very creative. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Maria Jordan 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      A magical fairytale with life lessons of wisdom between the lines.

      Voted UP and ABI...Loved this a LaT... Hugs, Maria

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Fabulous LaThing! What a very clever idea, enjoyed the read and voted up,

      Jan

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Adorable write..Clever and witty..

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      Awesomely written and so cleverly done !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Great to see you, Joyce! Really appreciate your stopping by and commenting. See you around! :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Ryem! Thanks for sharing..... And I am glad you enjoyed it :)

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      We should take this poem with us where ever we go. Great writing.

      Voted up and awesome, Joyce.

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      Ryem 5 years ago from Maryland

      In this poem, you deliver a strong message with such an adorable tone. It's an amazing piece. Voted up and sharing : )

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Billy! Great to see you this morning...... And you have a beautiful nymph :)

      Happy to know that you enjoyed it, and thanks for the comment!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      ROFL, Hey Frank..... We won't read between the lines, and we will leave your mind alone! :))

      Really appreciate your stopping by! Hope you find your Nymph!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      My friend, this was so clever! Well done! I happen to be living with my little nymph and I've never been happier. I just love this poem!

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      yeah I really missed that nymph in my life... you know parts of this piece sounds dirty..lol or is it just mind mind taking me into the...... yeah nevertheless I loved it!!!!!!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL, Richy, Richy, Richy!! Wonderful addition to the poem.... :)

      Don't even ask me where the inspiration came from :)) Always good to see you here, and thanks for the great comment, love it!

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      So instead of listening to J this day

      kick his butt out and send him on his way

      for the nymph in your life will always be true

      she'll never leave will always be there for you

      Loved it, Lady! So cute, but yet such strong meaning! Great Job!