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Poem: Look Around Us.....

Updated on February 26, 2013
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Open your eyes and see
The world around you and me.

The love that flows through,
Wonderful times we knew.

Flowers that bloom around
Songs with sweetest sounds.

Rivers that washes away
All that sorrows of forgotten days.

Life has seen its time,
Thoughts that came in mind.

World that passed us by
With tears of joy and cry!

Laughter in the meadows,
Are just the passing shadows.

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Time will come to show
Our love would only grow.

With each passing years,
Hearts will learn to bear.

With you by my side,
Through high and low tides.

Hold on to my heart
Even when we are apart.

With dreams that we share
For me, you will always be there.


Together Forever .......

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hiii there, dear Epi! Thank you so much for stopping by here..... I have missed visiting you and others! Have been off for a while..... Will be stopping by soon. Take care dear friend! See you soon.... :)

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      One of my poetic favorites by you - and I love the title - it seems to say to me that 'just look around us' to the entitlement of hope and optimism.

      You have the heart of a true poet and you have a true poetic heart as I can see and read in your words here (and elsewhere too) on your hallowed hubpage.

      I've missed and just popped by to see how you are feeling - I am sending my sincere warmest wishes and good thoughts to you courtesy of Colin and his cats who are still in late winter mode here at lake erie time ontario canada 1:33pm

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, aubrey! Great to see u here.... Glad you love it! Thanks for stopping by, always good to see you :)

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Beautiful, La. Loved this. :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, James!

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      I will do my best to keep up with your hubs;)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, James. W! Yes, love is everlasting if you find the true love. Sometimes we fall for the wrong person and assume that it is love! Thanks for the vote, and your visit is greatly appreciated.

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      Tijani Achamlal 5 years ago from Morocco

      love is everlasting .Its flow never ends.I voted up.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks LittleFairy, for stopping by and for your lovely comment. Glad you liked it :)

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      LittleFairy 5 years ago

      My favourite line is 'Rivers that washes away

      All that sorrows of forgotten days.'

      Very short and sweet your writing is!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Faith, for the lovely comment. I am also having problem receiving notifications about new hubs. Not sure what's going on! Appreciate your stopping by..... Take care :)

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      Faith Reaper 5 years ago from southern USA

      That is a lovely thought, "you will always be there." Wow, LaThing, I am glad I just came on to your profile page, as I guess I just have been missing your lovely poetry due to so many emails, that I need to get a handle on---until then, I'll just go straight to the profile pages. Voted Way Up to the Heavens. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, Valleypoet! Appreciate your commenting and its always good to see you :)

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      Valleypoet 5 years ago

      An awesome write LaThing...love surviving all the trials and tribulations of life....just what life should be all about. Voted up:-))

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Leslie! It's wonderful to see you here..... Sorry, I haven't been to your corner lately..... Will be stopping by soon! Take care my friend :)

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      An awesome poem, really lovely!

      Voted up

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks for reading my poem, Girishpuri. Appreciate your comment and votes :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Jan, great to see you here! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for votes :)

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      open your eye and see,

      'the world around you and me,

      touching and beautiful piece of poetry, voted beautiful.

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Very touching and loving poem LaThing. Enjoyed the read and voted up,

      Jan

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, Gypsy Rose! Appciate your stopping by and your comment. See you around :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Loved this the words so romantic.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Dear, dear Jen! Glad I could make you smile, that makes me happy :)

      Thanks for the lovely comment, and for dropping by.... See you around!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, LittleFairy! Awww, what a sweet name.... Love it! Thanks for the comment, and yes, wrote it for someone special :) my dear Hubby, lol. Thanks for stopping by.....

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Rosemay, very well said! Thanks for stopping by, appreciate your comment and everything :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Lol, MH! From any side of the curtain, I can say this much - you are Kw'ol! :)

      Thanks, buddy!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks Bobbi, you made my day :) and I am glad it touched your heart! Thanks for all you help, always a pleasure to see you here. Have a great weekend.....

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Ruby.... You are absolutely right! Only the strong love last! Thanks for your visit and your comment, dear friend! :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Lol, girl friend! I wish I had this Love Thing down, haha..... Thanks for your vote, Mar.... Hugs back at ya :))

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      @HattieMattieMae, love your name :) thanks for the comment. See you around!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi Sunnie, that's a beautiful point! Thanks for dropping by and love your comment!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Thanks, dear Deb! Nothing like your beautiful poems...... Always good to see you. Appreciate all your support :))

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Kashmir! Thanks for stopping by, and for your lovely comment:) see you around!

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      Jennifer Stone 5 years ago from the Riverbank, England

      Ahh this is lovely LaThing... made me think of my man (still in bed bless him) and made me smile.... Voted up and all sorts, all the best, Jen

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      LittleFairy 5 years ago

      You have lots of love into this poetry for a loved one, I can tell :D

      It captures all those moments that are precious to lovers everywhere.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      True love will survive all the ups and downs and separations. You have captured it beautifully here.

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Well put. thank you. In the end there is only one thing that matters. But it is easy to say from my side of the curtain of life.

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      PurvisBobbi44 5 years ago from Florida

      Hi,

      Now that sweet poem touched my heart. As it from written from the heart of someone who appreciates the joy of nature and the pleasure of just being in this world now. Each day is a cherished time---a gift of life.

      This was so beautiful.

      Thanks--I voted beautiful and awesome and sent it to my FB.

      Bobbi Purvis

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      When love prevails through times of doubt and uncertainties, surely is a strong love that lasts. Beautiful..

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      Maria Jordan 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Hold on to my heart

      Even when we are apart...

      LA...you have got this love THING down pat...Voted UP & ABI.

      Hugs, Maria

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      HattieMattieMae 5 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Very nice poem! :)

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      Sunnie Day 5 years ago

      The greatest love of all is getting through the trials and growing in spite of circumstances..Thank you for the beautiful thoughts today..

      God bless,

      Sunnie

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Lathing all I can say is WOW!!! I love this poem.. this is just too awesome.

      sharing

      Debbie

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      Thomas Silvia 5 years ago from Massachusetts

      A very beautifully written poem which made a delightful read !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Linda! Thank you for stopping by. I, actually, just started writing again after a long break..... Didn't think I could do it, and now I can't seem to stop, lol!! Someone here in HP encouraged me to try and here I am :) give it a try, there is nothing to loose :))

      Appreciate your votes and comment!

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      Linda Crist 5 years ago from Central Virginia

      I am always so envious of those who can write poetry. This was beautiful; very tender and sweet. Voted up.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hey Joyce, great to see you here! Thanks for reading my work and your support is truly appreciated :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi, Bell! Thanks for stopping by and all your votes..... Appreciate it :)

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, my dear friend, Billy!! Good to see you, and glad you can relate to this piece..... Hope you have a wonderful day, what is left of it :) Thanks!

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderful poem that reads so truthfully.

      Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Randi Benlulu 5 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      beautiful words, beautifully spoken! Up and beautiful!

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Very lovely poem my friend; I think you just described Bev and I, but you could have been describing me and life as well. Thank you for some sunshine early in the morning on a foggy day.

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      LOL@Frank! Yes, reek is a word but not a pleasant one..... So, we will give it a new meaning, right? :))

      Love to see you, always! Thanks for the 'beautiful' comment :)

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      Frank Atanacio 5 years ago from Shelton

      you know Lathing you work just reeks of messages.. I like that about what you pen.. voted up and beautifully written.. reeks? is that a word?

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Dear Vincent, hope you find your soulmate soon, and happiness, wherever you may be! We all have one, don't we? :)

      It's always lovely to see you, and I truly appreciate your comment!

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      LaThing 5 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Hi there, Richy! Great to see you this morning :) Yes, being apart can be a trial, and we have had some moments in our life, due to work, that we had to be apart. Knowing that you are there for them makes a big difference! Thanks for your support :)

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      I envy those who find each other and stay together through all the adversities that life tends to throw at us. Being and staying in love with that special person so eloquently penned here is truly a miracle, as sadly to many couples are falling on the wayside and breaking up. I have not found my soulmate/twin, yet there may still be hope. If not, I am content with living alone and keeping close friends and even closer to my pen. This is a wonderful piece you penned here my poetic friend. Bravo.

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      Rich 5 years ago from Kentucky

      If I'd only known! lol

      Great testament to a loved one. Separation brings doubts. It's nice to know love is strong at those times. Great Job!