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Poem : The Almighty

Updated on November 12, 2015
the inner light
the inner light
feeling blessed
feeling blessed


Oh God ! I feel so enriched,

that you are the creator of this heavenly bliss.



You are my guide, the only inner light,

that shines from within when everything around is not so right.

I know you'll always be there by my side,

to help me to struggle through the darkest of times.


You are my destroyer, so are the originator,

for i came here and will depart sooner or later.

As long as i am on this Earth,

Please hold my hand on every path,

Protect me from the problems and its ill-effects,

Help me succeed in life with my hard work and efforts.


Thank you Lord for a family so blessed,

Parents and friends so supportive and fabulous,

Forgive me Lord if i love mom and dad more than you,

for they are the living gods on Earth sent only by you!



copyright ~ Sakshi Davessar 12 Nov, 2015

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      Shaloo Walia 23 months ago

      A beautiful prayer!

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      Sakshi Davessar 2 years ago from Punjab, India

      Thank you so very much for your visit and for a lovely comment.

      I really admire your advice and will surely follow it. Actually i love putting rhyming in my poems and so i will look after this aspect .

      Again thanks a lot. Stay blessed. Jai shree ram

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      Ruafridi 2 years ago

      Wah Sakshi jee wah! What I liked the most is the last stanza, though all the poem is great:

      "Forgive me Lord if i love mom and dad more than you,

      for they are the living gods on Earth sent only by you!"

      Really great poem but should I suggest you one thing? I think you should increase the density of Rhyming Words in your poems. Believe me you have got great topics and if you increment Rhyme level, your poems will become ideal!

      Thanks for sharing. I can't resist thinking and thanking my God and my heart is boiling to find Him! Very great!

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      Sakshi Davessar 2 years ago from Punjab, India

      Exactly :) Thank you for your time and response

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      thanksgiving to the Great GOD

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      Sakshi Davessar 2 years ago from Punjab, India

      Thank you so much :)

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      ARainey 2 years ago

      Awesome poem :)

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      Sakshi Davessar 2 years ago from Punjab, India

      Thanku so much Surabhi dear :))

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      Sakshi Davessar 2 years ago from Punjab, India

      Thank you very much manatita. Oh really ! glad to know that. Yes you are correct . I can and do visualize God in my parents. Keep smiling :)

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      Surabhi Kaura 2 years ago

      Well done, Sakshi. Beautiful message. Supreme is Supreme.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Again you remind me so much of Surabhi: A childlike heart; sweet simplicity and innocence in thought. How noble! Now God is infinitely more beautiful than your parents, but all you need to do, is to increase that vision of Him in them. Still, you make me smile. Nice one. In Love and Light.

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      Sakshi Davessar 2 years ago from Punjab, India

      thanku soo much hari :)

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      Sakshi Davessar 2 years ago from Punjab, India

      Thanku very much Subjugator :)

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      Hari Prasad S 2 years ago from Bangalore

      sakshi, you have a powerful, simple thanks giving prayer here. great going.

      - hari

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      Shubhro Sen 2 years ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Magnificent.