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Love Poem for Girlfriend

Updated on November 3, 2017
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Ashish is an aspiring writer who has hit the online market with success. He has pursued Creative Writing from London School of Journalism.

This love poem is dedicated to all true lovers around the world. Those who have taken a lot of efforts to expressing their feelings, their madness, and their love to their girl.


When I saw you I went on a distressful plight,

Unknowingly you stole my heart at first sight.


It seemed that you were the medicine for my painful heart,

I thought to make you my sweetheart.


It was difficult to reach you in this concrete jungle,

Long distances and external rumbles made me crumble.


I stole your photos illegally,

Because I wanted to give you space in my heart legally.


With hard work & struggle, I reached out to you,

Wanted to initiate the conversation with you, without losing my values.


When you ignored me, it seemed “YOU + ME = IMPOSSIBLE”,

However my heart said, “Be brave everything is POSSIBLE”.


Your beautiful smile made my day bright,

It was the reason I couldn’t sleep all night.


Your presence always made my heart beat faster,

A life without you would be a disaster.


People laughed and criticized me without any humility,

But to get you on any condition was my priority.


Your ignorance was killing me,

But still, a light of hope was kindling within me.


Life without you was dull and dry,

The constant thought of losing you, made me cry.


I know you were tempted to say ‘I HATE YOU’,

But now I have changed the game by saying ‘I LOVE YOU’.


I gave you so much pain and trouble,

But I will heal your scars, by loving you double.


You asked me, “When I need you, will you take your stand ever?”

Here is my Answer: YES I will and I will be Your’s Forever

Couple exchanging a kiss after she got her answer from him, 'YES I will and I will be Yours Forever'.
Couple exchanging a kiss after she got her answer from him, 'YES I will and I will be Yours Forever'. | Source

A Love Poem For Her By Ashish Dadgaa

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      Ashi 12 months ago

      @Rajan Singh Jolly ,

      Thank you for your feedback on my poem :)

      Bless you.

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 12 months ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Simply beautiful. I love the simplicity and freshness of your words.

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      Ashi 15 months ago

      @Lisa,

      Yes very well observed :)

      This words are directly from heart.

      Thank you so much Lisa.

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      Lisa VanVorst 15 months ago from New Jersey

      Oh young love and words so spoken with love, true love must start at the beginning and this poem reflects that. Another beautifully written love poem.

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      Ashi 17 months ago

      @ Review Wizard,

      Thank you very much :)

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      Review Wizard 17 months ago

      emotionally very charged, beautifully written.

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      Ashi 21 months ago

      @Nibha,

      Thank you so much for your feedback :)

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      Nibha 21 months ago

      Wow truely very Romantically you wrote I just feel love and all true feeling And its really well describe in this short poem .

      Nice

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      Ashi 22 months ago

      Awww Thank you very much for appreciating my effort :)

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      I see that you have the gift of using videos. How I wish that more of my poems will traverse this path. Very nicely done, my Friend.

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      Ashi 22 months ago

      @Manatita,

      Thank you so much for your constructive feedback on my words. You have an in-depth understanding of each and every word. Really impressive.

      Thank you, Guruji.

      Hari Om!

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      Beautiful poem! You seem to want to make her your wife, so there is nothing wrong with the words 'illegally' and 'legally' in the context in which they are used. Regally is a sublime word, yes, but not the right one for marriage in this poem. Om Shanti!

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      Ashi 23 months ago

      @Surabhi Kaura

      Haha...Yes Surabhi, I made it :)

      Thank you so much, glad you like my work.

      Awww you seem fan of Bollywood songs too :D

      I will definitely take your feedback into consideration and update it :)

      Thank you for your feedback :)

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      Ashi 23 months ago

      Thank you @Hari Prasad

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      Surabhi Kaura 23 months ago

      Oh my goodness! I just noticed the video. You made it? Beautiful composition with the pictures. I love that tune - "Ye khula aasma... aa gaye hum kaha." Lovely!

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      Surabhi Kaura 23 months ago

      Well, a great start here with a love poem. I would change the word 'illegally' as it takes the poem to a different level. How about, "I held your hand regally?" A sweet poem. Hari Om.

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      Hari Prasad S 23 months ago from Bangalore

      Nice one. Ashish. :-)

      - Hari

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