ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel
  • »
  • Books, Literature, and Writing»
  • Poems & Poetry

Poems and Poetry: Rainbow in The Sky

Updated on April 27, 2015

You Stole My Heart

What have I done that you were

Sent to earth for the express purpose

Of stealing my heart

You’re like a potent wine that has

Gone to my head

I cherish you as something rare and precious

You ‘re not a mere woman in my opinion

You’re the very essence of the perfect


You’re as radiant as rainbow in the sky

You’re more magnetic than magnet

Your movement seemed as fluid as rippling

Water flowing over a submerged stone

I’m amazed by the depth of your beauty.


    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • tonymodus profile image

      tonymodus 6 years ago

      Thank you for your comment. I always try to write better all the time.

    • CloudExplorer profile image

      Mike Pugh 6 years ago from New York City

      The poem is ok, but needs a bit of work I think, just give it a read through or two, and you'll see what I mean.

      The 'rainbow' line in particular, and 'movement' one especially. Maybe its your writing style of poetry, well anyhow good job though overall.

      Thanks for sharing it with us all, I'll try a few more of your hubs, soon.