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Poetry--Love Forevermore

Updated on July 22, 2012

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This was a challenge poem; a friend of mine wanted me to write a poem that captured a long relationship over time, that he wanted to present to his to new lover that he had only known for a few weeks. I had 45 minutes, and I did have to do a revision because he wanted it shorter so he could memorize it before their big date. This is the version he decided on.

I hope enjoy Love Forevermore. Thank-you for taking the time to read this poem. Please feel free to comment; suggestions are always welcomed.

Source: Painted by my oldest daughter Chrishell
Source: Painted by my oldest daughter Chrishell

Love Forevermore


You and I love each other forever long,

Together our love is a number one song.

Through the hard times our love endures

The wounds we may have, our love cures.


Our love for one another shall never part,

Even if weakness creeps into our joined heart.

Joined together forever by destiny and fate,

Our Karmic bond made each other our soul mate.


Occasionally doubt may creep in,

Insecurities make us feel our love is a sin.

We must remember no matter what the future has in store,

Our love will continue to grow forevermore.


Each obstacle we may face no matter how hard it may be,

The seeds we will plant one day will continue to grow on our family tree.

Whenever one doubts whether it is meant to be,

We shall always remember our love is stronger and bound by destiny.


Our souls joined permanently together,

Will survive life’s great endeavor

Love Forevermore,

Our love will always endure.

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    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      unknown spy, THANK-YOU!!!! I do appreciate your comments!!! THANKS AGAIN!!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Snowdrops, THANK-YOU so very much for your very kind and encouraging comments!!! I truly do appreciate them!!! THANKS!!!

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      IAmForbidden 

      6 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      I really love your poem Patty!beautiful!

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      snowdrops 

      6 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      A beautiful masterpiece Patty! Wow kudos to this hub

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Olde Cashmere, Thank-you for your kind comments as well as votes!!! Thanks Again!!!

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      Olde Cashmere 

      6 years ago

      Fantastic achievement with the timeline you were given and the results presented are excellent. This is lovely Patty Kenyon. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful :)

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Joy56, Poetry just like other writing forms is an art...some people appreciate it and some people don't. We can't let others, like some of the people in that forum, discourage us or others from writing. :) I like your comments as well!!

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      Joy56 

      6 years ago

      met you in the forums...... I have not been as active as i once was on hubpages, loved your comments ....... We poets have to stick together, and encourage each other...... I tend not to rhyme at all now in my work, but it was so nice to read this, keep writing....

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Martie, THANK-YOU soooo much for your comments!!! I truly do appreciate them!!!

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      Martie Coetser 

      6 years ago from South Africa

      Patty, I love this poem. So positive, trusting the future....

      Voted up and beautiful!

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      girishpuri, Thank-you sooooo very much!!! I truly do appreciate it!!! THANKS AGAIN!!

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      Girish puri 

      6 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Our souls joined permanently together, awesome, voted up

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      midget38, Thank-you sooo much!! I do appreciate your comments and I love reading your Poetry!!! Nice Job with the riddle today!!

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      Michelle Liew 

      6 years ago from Singapore

      Patty, a great poem of being as one when you're in love. We should show this to all couples as an example! Well done!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      IntegrityYes, Thank-you sooooo much!! I always appreciate your kind comments as well as your form of poetry!! Thanks Again!!!

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      IntegrityYes 

      6 years ago

      That is another fantastic poem. You rock very hard!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      kygirl89, Thank you soooo much!! I truly do appreciate your comments...That part you quoted actually is one of my favorite parts of the poem and one that I think many in love will relate to. I wish you and your husband the very best!! :)

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      mckbirdbks, Thank-you so much for your comments about the poem and THANK-YOU for the comments about my daughter's painting; I will be sure to pass the comment on to her!! She is very talented and doesn't realize it!!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Frank, Thank-you for your comments and supporting another Connecticut resident!! :) I do appreciate it!!!

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      kygirl89 

      6 years ago from West Virginia

      This is an amazing poem. I love the line, "The seeds we will plant one day will continue to grow on our family tree." I was thinking of my husband and I and how one day we hope to have children and watch them grow. Thank you for sharing!

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      mckbirdbks 

      6 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Well this certainly is the dream. Nicely done. No telling what you would have come up with, given an hour. :) Your daughters painting is very nice.

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      Frank Atanacio 

      6 years ago from Shelton

      Hey Patty this was very well written I loved it and Im not saying that because you are a Connecticut resident oo.. Im just speaking the truth :) Frank

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      ready2rage, Thank-you for your opinion, I always love suggestions, this poem was settled toward what my challenge was and what my friend wanted me to write, this is not what I would normally write, feel free to read my other poems...honestly I post all of my challenges, whether or not I agree what the person challenged me to do!! :) THANK-YOU soo much for your suggestions.

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      ready2rage 

      6 years ago from Nevada

      i write poetry myself. i only have one posted but. im a big critic ecspecially on my own work. dont take offense to anything i say, if anything it should help you become a better writer.. the only thing i have to say that would make this poem better,, that hasnt already been said in before comments, is that you should work on the flow of the lines, if your poem is going to rhyme, the flow should match perfect.. IMO

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Josh, THANK-YOU sooooo Much!!! I really appreciate the support!!!

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      Joshua Zerbini 

      6 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Patty,

      I definitely agree with Billy! Do some google searching and maybe you can find some tips on how to set up an ebook! Your poems are beautiful and awesome!! :)

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Mhatter, Thank-you for your comments!!! I LOVE "Imitate what you like of others and always let your light shine." Definite words of wisdom!! Thank-you sooo much!!!

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      good work. you asked for "opportunities for improvement". I am not a poetry teacher and this is not a class (per say). Imitate what you like of others and always let your light shine.

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      movielardatadare, I am glad you enjoyed the poem and thank-you for commenting!!! Also THANK-YOU for the comment in regards to Chrishell's painting, I will be sure to pass that on to her!!!

      CONGRATULATIONS to you and your fiance!!! I wish you both the very best!!!!

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      movielardatadare 

      6 years ago from Texas

      Patty, I truly enjoyed this poem! Looks like I'm going to have to write a response to this one. Of course it's going to be a positive response because I like reading this poem. I'm in deep love with my fiancee, so this poem really hits home with me! Excellent job, and I'm definitely going to have to keep reading more of your poems. Chrishell did an awesome job on that painting!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Thank-you billybuc!!! I do appreciate your encouragement!! In regards to publishing an ebook, I wouldn't even know where to begin...there are sooooo very many EXCELLENT poets and writers on HubPages, I wouldn't even begin to compare myself with them.

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      rcrumple, I couldn't agree with you more!!! My friend that asked me to write this poem, has a terrible reputation with the ladies. However, the person he is with now, he actually seems to care about. She has doubts because of his reputation. The original poem I wrote didn't have enough negativity about love that reflected who he really is. This poem was written specifically to him and how he wanted to reflect his feelings towards her. He had me revise the poem more to suit the words, his feelings, and not something that most lovers would say to one another. I personally loved my original poem however, I post my writing challenges on here. There big date night is on Thursday; If I remember, I will post on here what she thought!! THANKS for the suggestions!! I do appreciate it!!

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      Rich 

      6 years ago from Kentucky

      Patty, you know I love your poems. I like this one, and hopefully, you won't take offense, but this one feels rushed. You're changing tenses from a current "our love together shall never part" to the future "even if weakness creeps in" to the past "...made each other our soul mate" all in the same stanza. Also, you fought the possibility of weakness once "that the love will never part" and as soon as that's conquered, you reopen the topic by bringing in "doubt" two more times, another possible weakness. Do people in love want to be reminded about all the negative possibilities, or, do they want constant reinforcement and promises of devotion, loyalty, shining stars of joy, and , love forever long? Again, you've written many more than I so please excuse my boldness. I could be totally off base. And I do like it. I know you're a tremendous writer and this one just seems like if given more time to go back over, could have been another tremendous offering by one that definitely has a gifted heart and talent. Still, I voted up and interesting.

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Another beautiful piece of writing. Have you ever thought of publishing an ebook of your poetry? Just a thought, but you really are quite good....in fact, prolific would be another word to toss in there. :)

      Great job Patty!

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