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Poetry--Why do you treat me so?

Updated on July 17, 2012

Why?

Why do you treat me so,

what have I done,

You've drunken to much liquor,

You've taken all the fun.


You have taken things way to far,

left me to no sleep,

I fear the day I awaken,

and yet no body to creep.


What have I done,

You've taken things to far,

What have I done,

and all you want is a bar.


Come morrow will I have a say,

or will I be dead that next and coming day?

What have I done to be treated this way,

What have I done,

to cause this display,

for I fear the most,

that again I won't be able to play.


What I fear the most is not to live another day.

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    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      IntegrityYes, Thank-you soooo much for commenting and voting!!!! I do appreciate it!!!

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      IntegrityYes 

      6 years ago

      That is so emotional,Patty. I voted up.

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Damodar, Awww....sorry it made you said, but glad that you thought it was good!!

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      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      iamaudraleigh, Everything is fine...Thank-you for your concerns!!!

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      Damodar Bashyal 

      6 years ago from Banksia, Sydney, Australia

      made me sad oink oink... :(

      good poem.

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      iamaudraleigh 

      6 years ago

      I hope everything is ok.

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Mhatter, I am glad that you think this a good poem. Most of my writing is based on personal views, experiences, etc. We have all been through hard times...but we learn from those experiences, either things change, or it is time to move on. Things have changed. Thank-you for your thoughts!!!!

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      I pray this is just a good poem

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      billybuc, It's not so much a poetry bug...I am usually working on a few hubs at the same time, and when I get writer's block, I write a poem...lol Thank-you for your support, I really do appreciate it!!!

    • Patty Kenyon profile imageAUTHOR

      Patty Kenyon 

      6 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      josh, Thanks again for reading yet another poem I wrote!! I appreciate it!!

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      Bill Holland 

      6 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Awww, you have the poetry bug big time, don't you? It is fun to watch you grow as a writer and to be a part of the Patty Experience. Great job!

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      Joshua Zerbini 

      6 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Patty,

      Another good one Patty! I enjoyed how you ended the poem, and all of us can relate to it. Great job!

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