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Poli-Tick Talk

Updated on October 3, 2011

Poli-Tick Talk: A Poetry Reading

poli-tic tac toe

Whose turn?
Whose turn?

a political limerick

Poli-tick talk.

Tick Tock.

Boom.

Bang.

What a Shock.

Poli-ticking and talking,

And totally shocking

Grown men

And women

In kinderstockings.

America's wondering,

Why are you floundering?

Do your jobs

Foolish snobs

And stop all the squandering.

Poli-talk ticking

And Nit picking

Tax and

Relax

The clock’s ticking.

Poli-tick talk.

Tick Tock.

Boom.

Bang.

What a Shock.


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      Vernon Bradley 7 years ago from Yucaipa, California

      Love it! Politics could be so cool, but it has lost something. I don''t know if there was ever a time that such a virtue as integrity was ever a part of politicks, but I think it could be! Well I guess everyone knows now how naive I am!!

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      Thanks Vern. I think you're on to something! not just the virtue of integrity. virtue of any kind! Dichotomy and absolutism do not nurture virtue, I suppose.

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      billyaustindillon 7 years ago

      I love limericks - this was brilliant Kim!

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      Thanks so much, Billy.

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      thevoice 7 years ago from carthage ill

      terrific great hub read thanks

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      thanks voice. it was fun too! A little lighter and more playful than thought bubbles, with a touch of serious.

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      Deborah Demander 7 years ago from First Wyoming, then THE WORLD

      That's a good one, short, sweet, and to the point.

      Namaste

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      Yep!

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      MFB III 7 years ago from United States

      The clock is melting under the heated glare of so much dissatisfaction, the hands that could change the times into something far more worthwhile are bent from the burdens of the nervous tics, the endless angst filled talks, and the alarms which are always going off over nothing more serious then just another day of trying to make the life as we know it now, far more timeless.~~Great Write~~~MFB III

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      Beautiful MFB! Thanks for sharing such well chosen words and thoughts. Your reply is poetic and profound....and a nice way to start the day. Thank you.

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Following MFB just makes me feel inadequate! I could never top anything that guys says. "The clock is melting under the heated glare..."

      Nevertheless- great poem! When children grow up they pretend that one of these parties is the best. One will be the worst. If they argue with each other long enough and loud enough the masses will think they can make the "repair" a few years later. Meanwhile- both parties have no intention of forsaking the money and power that brought them to power.

      Phooey! I like MFB's better. Can we switch?

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      We can't all achieve MFB's level of genius, and it would be dull world if we were all alike. MFB is profoundly poetic. You are poetically profound, Micky. It could take me as long to come up with a comment like his, as it does to write another hub! Once again, I really do appreciate your taking the time to comment Micky.

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      blackreign2012 7 years ago

      Once again a great hub ty for sharing ~hugs~

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      ahhhh. hug back. Thanks.

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      Cybermouse 7 years ago from Bentonville, AR

      An excellent poem. I'm glad you hadn't taken it down yet so I had a chance to read it.

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      Thanks Cybermouse. I'm glad you had a chance to read it! Thanks for taking the time.

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      James A Watkins 7 years ago from Chicago

      I enjoyed your fine poem. Thank you very much for providing a link to my article. That is quite gracious of you! :)

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      Kim Harris 7 years ago

      Love your work, James. I'm not sure if there is hub etiquette on linking. Thanks for taking the time to check out my poem - political limerick.

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      alternate poet 6 years ago

      Really love this one - short, sharp, explosive and spot on.

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      Kim Harris 6 years ago

      omg ty AP! Love your interpretation.

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      Gail Sobotkin 5 years ago from South Carolina

      Wow Kim, this hub was written 15 months ago but it seems more relevant now than ever. Our country's credit rating is at stake and there is a possibility of default on paying bills if the politicians can't get their act together. Today's newspaper front page showed Reid and Boehner in diapers acting like whiny crybabies!

      You said it well in this clever political limerick:

      "Grown men

      And women

      In kinderstockings."

      Cool poem. Voted up, useful, funny and interesting.

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      Kim Harris 5 years ago

      Thanks Happyboomernurse! I could see it coming! There was too much splitting, divisiveness, criticizing and blaming. A house divided... Sadly, it's been relevant for too long! I saw your interview with Dr Bill. It was very well done. I couldn't find where or how to comment though.

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      Gail Sobotkin 5 years ago from South Carolina

      There is no place to comment on Hubber to Hubber interviews. I appreciate your complement on the interview I did with Dr. Bill Tollefson. He was a great interviewee, very interesting and professional, and I felt honored to do an interview with him. He's also a cool guy.

      Again, thanks for letting me know you enjoyed reading it.

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      Sydney 5 years ago

      love the "poli tic tac toe" video!

      cheers, Sydney

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      Kim Harris 5 years ago

      LOL Sydney. I haven't had a comment on this one in a while. Maybe it will pick up again during the upcoming political campaign. Thanks for commenting.

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      Kim Harris 5 years ago

      HBM - not sure how I missed your comment here:) I think I got it but didn't reply for some reason. Anyway - months later - no problem. It was well done.

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